Just Look

I found myself pouting from nothingness, my life cascaded into a big mess, so while I was feeling down I looked with a helpless frown... God was smiling with His tender caress.

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Dm Babbit

Date: 5/9/2016 6:11:00 AM

Nicely played. Congrats

George Aul
Date: 5/9/2016 9:54:00 AM

Thanks and congrats on your win............. George

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/8/2016 5:58:00 PM

Congrats George, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

George Aul
Date: 5/9/2016 9:53:00 AM

Thanks and congrats

Julia Ward

Date: 5/8/2016 6:42:00 AM

A Limerick form didn't suit my contest subject, but you managed to get the rules in perfectly, hence the HM. Thanks for entering.

George Aul
Date: 5/9/2016 9:52:00 AM

Thanks for sponsoring, yeah, I knew it may not fit the subject, but I tried to put a slight twist on the form... Thanks......... George