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Just Look

I found myself pouting from nothingness,
my life cascaded into a big mess,
so while I was feeling down
I looked with a helpless frown...
God was smiling with His tender caress.

Copyright © George Aul | Year Posted 2016

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May 9, 2016 at 6:11 AM

Nicely played. Congrats

May 9, 2016 at 9:54 AM

Thanks and congrats on your win............. George

May 8, 2016 at 5:58 PM

Congrats George, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

May 9, 2016 at 9:53 AM

Thanks and congrats

May 8, 2016 at 6:42 AM

A Limerick form didn't suit my contest subject, but you managed to get the rules in perfectly, hence the HM. Thanks for entering.

May 9, 2016 at 9:52 AM

Thanks for sponsoring, yeah, I knew it may not fit the subject, but I tried to put a slight twist on the form... Thanks......... George

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