Just Listen

No sounds 
no instrumental 
Just my breathing 
and my beating heart
forgive me but I'm trying 
to be sentimental 
I just don't know where to start
how does one get in your heart? 
I'm searching for diamonds 
not the broken parts 

Your beautiful and 
My emotions are high 
and I don't know what 
I'm getting into
but do we really need a reason why
when our heart sees potential 
I think I'm definitely worth
getting into 
I'm pouring out my heart 
just using a paper and a pencil
my two favorite utensils  

I wanted to avoid spilling my heart
like a cold coffee being knocked over 
Love has knocked me down 
and I'm still slouching over 
I want you near me 
because it feels as natural
as having Halloween candy on 
October 31.

I bet you could rip through this plastic rap
and find the real me using just your teeth
and I know you could savor me like cake down underneath 
but all sexual stuff aside I really just want
you to hear me.

Feel me.
The real me. 
No distractions.
I only hope for a positive reaction. 
Your lips on mines intertwined
Just listen to my body
and the beating of my heart
than maybe you'll know where 
to start.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Tugaff Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 12:09 AM
Shahana, this is written from the heart. I like it my friend. Keep on sharing. Ernilando
Gumbo Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 7:05 AM
Oh I love this! Your words are flowing just perfectly and such a heartfelt write! :) Izzy
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 4:40 PM
Ahhhhhhh, love. It takes a grip and all reason flees. I enjoyed your heartfelt poem. Keep writing. Love, Dane
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