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Just Listen

as I sit on my porch~
   
the heaviness of my thoughts...

    so melodious is the sound.....

of the day light sounds that abound...

    crickets are singing, sounds... 

   are ringing. birds are chirping...

 the brook is gurgling....

frogs are cying for rain..  it beats the sound...

  of inane thoughts foraging through my brain...

      so melodious of daylight sounds...

where peacefulness invades the brain...

Copyright © Deneen White | Year Posted 2008

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Sharon Winter Date: 8/26/2008 7:43:00 PM Lovely imagery here overpowering and sending those thoughts away while appreciating nature at her finest. So peaceful. Love, Shar Login to Reply

Cecil Hickman Date: 8/26/2008 4:42:00 PM sometimes if we really listen to natures messages they will and do calm us from the stresses of humankind,,very well written with flowing lines of image filled words that we only need to open our eyes and ears,,,blessings...Cecil Login to Reply

Heidie Buys Date: 8/26/2008 3:04:00 PM Love the contrast between the state of mind and the serenity of nature. Well balanced. Regards Heidie Login to Reply

Mohammad Yamin Date: 8/26/2008 10:27:00 AM Your poem profoundly reflects peace, tranquility and serenity. An exquisitely beautiful poem -very soothing. I am glad you liked my poem The Changing Colours Login to Reply

Ronald Bingham Date: 8/25/2008 8:15:00 PM D-nyce enjoyed this clever little write, & thank you for the dear comments, Ron Login to Reply

Janice Herzog Date: 8/25/2008 1:33:00 PM Dear Deneen: This is a very serene poem. Really nice. Thank-you for reading my poem. I'm glad you liked it. Sincerely, Janice Herzog xoxo Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 8/25/2008 1:30:00 PM that sounds so peaceful and and beautiful such nature and what a wonder. this was a wonderful poem. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comment Login to Reply

Michael Degenhardt Date: 8/25/2008 10:28:00 AM Sounds and smells do that for me. This is wonderful. Youi have a way of expressing yourself that lets the reader see and actually breathe between each word. That's a great effect! Terrific write. Michael Login to Reply