Just Like You

i've been standing here for hours, 
Comparing myself to You. 
All i have is this photo 
And a few broken stories 

About You. 
Just wondering, 
If You were here, 
Would things be different, 

Would they be better? 
Just wondering. 
Would i be so miserable, 
or would i be happy? 

i don't know too much about You, 
But i've been told that I am Just Like You.
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September 24, 2014 at 5:32 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Azharuddin - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Adam Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 6:17 AM
hey, thanks for the warm welcome. Its really a pleasure to be here. :)
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September 23, 2014 at 9:27 PM
thank you so much for the reply on my comemnt. Linda
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September 22, 2014 at 8:14 PM
PS... A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 23, 2014 at 5:18 AM
Thanks for the invite. :) It feels really good to be part of a community of poets. I love this place!
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September 22, 2014 at 8:14 PM
WOW, Azharuddin, my biological mother did not raise me, however, I was told, I was just like here. I got to meet her at the end, and I have to say, I don't mind turning out like her. She had a good heart, did bad things, but had a good heart. Love this.. LINDA
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