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Just Like You

Hey dear Flawless Falls Just like you, I want to jump freely Rehabilitate myself freshly Hey dear Radiant River Just like you I want to sing solely Break the barriers slowly Hey dear Majestic Mountain, Just like you, I want to stand strong amidst the negativities that throng Hey dear tall trees Just like you I want to touch the sky nevertheless nudge my soil until I die Hey dear nourishing nature Just like you I want to absolve bad deeds done by humans and make them evolve

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Date: 6/30/2019 7:44:00 PM
Beautiful poem Supraja! -Smita
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Date: 1/3/2019 2:53:00 PM
LOvely poem, Supraja. I see it more as rhyme than free verse and it's nicely lyrical
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 1/3/2019 8:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Glad you liked it.
Date: 11/25/2018 8:52:00 AM
Great poem Supraja...
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 1/3/2019 8:52:00 PM
Thank you so much,So...
Date: 11/24/2018 2:04:00 PM
awwh, you are one with the wonder of nature...touch the sky, supraja... beautiful!..huggs
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/24/2018 7:20:00 PM
Wow. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment,Nette. Glad you liked it.
Date: 11/24/2018 9:57:00 AM
You aim high, Supraja...but you will not be disappointed; with so much belief you will surely achieve what you yearn for! Regards // paul
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/24/2018 7:19:00 PM
Thank you so much for your uplifting words,Paul. It means a lot. I'm blessed to have friends like you.
Date: 11/24/2018 8:01:00 AM
Hey , Supraja / Just like you/ I want to write superb poetry/ Thus among the Muses myself to find ! Excellent my dearest!
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/24/2018 7:17:00 PM
Wow that's so nice. You are so generous.I am blessed to have friends like you. Thank you so much,Demetrios.
Date: 11/24/2018 7:50:00 AM
Another one of your signature rendering on nature..quite a pleasant read..enjoyed the tone..well written, Supraja.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/24/2018 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/24/2018 6:57:00 AM
This is beautiful. Well written. A favorite for me :)
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/24/2018 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so much,Heidi. Glad you liked it.

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