Just Like You

Hey dear Flawless Falls
Just like you,
I want to jump freely
Rehabilitate myself freshly

Hey dear Radiant River
Just like you
I want to sing solely
Break the barriers slowly

Hey dear Majestic Mountain,
Just like you,
I want to stand strong
amidst the negativities that throng

Hey dear tall trees
Just like you
I want to touch the sky
nevertheless nudge my soil until I die

Hey dear nourishing nature
Just like you
I want to absolve
bad deeds done by humans and make them evolve
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kulkarni Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 7:44 PM
Beautiful poem Supraja! -Smita
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 2:53 PM
LOvely poem, Supraja. I see it more as rhyme than free verse and it's nicely lyrical
Kannan Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 8:52 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Glad you liked it.
One Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Great poem Supraja...
Kannan Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 8:52 PM
Thank you so much,So...
Onclaud Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 2:04 PM
awwh, you are one with the wonder of nature...touch the sky, supraja... beautiful!..huggs
Kannan Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 7:20 PM
Wow. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment,Nette. Glad you liked it.
Callus Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 9:57 AM
You aim high, Supraja...but you will not be disappointed; with so much belief you will surely achieve what you yearn for! Regards // paul
Kannan Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Thank you so much for your uplifting words,Paul. It means a lot. I'm blessed to have friends like you.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 8:01 AM
Hey , Supraja / Just like you/ I want to write superb poetry/ Thus among the Muses myself to find ! Excellent my dearest!
Kannan Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Wow that's so nice. You are so generous.I am blessed to have friends like you. Thank you so much,Demetrios.
Pandit Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Another one of your signature rendering on nature..quite a pleasant read..enjoyed the tone..well written, Supraja.
Kannan Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. Glad you enjoyed it.
Sands Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 6:57 AM
This is beautiful. Well written. A favorite for me :)
Kannan Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Thank you so much,Heidi. Glad you liked it.
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