Just Like the Wind

Before I ever saw those eyes How deeply I loved you Before you read my first thought I found you Before you ever dreamt of my lips I kissed your smile I meant nothing to you and you were already my world I lived in every breath you inhaled till that same breath became an exhile to a ghostly past Tonight,I live for what was Tomorrow I live to exist for what remains For what remains from that yesterday before I stopped calling your name I stopped following footprints Stopped searching your arms Stopped seeking the moon and believing in stars And Oncemore... In my soul's dusky night I will remember you... and who We used to be Through silent distance I 'd feel you within me Ever so soft,just like the wind Like zephyr breeze which left my cheek yet lingers sweetly into my sleep.
Revised Poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/28/2015 5:31:00 PM
I loved this Poem. I do hope that I am lucky enough to find a Love as deep as this Poem one day.
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Date: 4/2/2015 10:15:00 AM
Your poem falls within the category of romantic, fanciful and imaginative; armed with an energy of its own that propels it into our sphere of reality. Emile.
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Date: 3/31/2015 7:23:00 PM
those last 7 lines were killer. seriously good. your poetry has such a tender honesty
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Date: 1/3/2015 1:53:00 AM
Super innocent holy. "I kissed your smile"...Outstanding feelings. Favorite.
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Date: 12/28/2014 12:14:00 PM
really beautifully painted piece charmaine i pray you had a good christmas wishing you a happy new year
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Date: 12/25/2014 5:07:00 PM
Wow, Char! your talent of line upon line of ephemeral soulful images combine to produce a rich tapestry of love...very cool indeed! jimbo
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Date: 12/25/2014 12:55:00 PM
Extremely romantic and stunningly beautiful. Happy Holidays to you and yours. A Fav!
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Date: 12/24/2014 10:39:00 PM
I will revise my rating for this revised poem, from 7 to 7 !! :) Merry Christmas Charmaine
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Date: 12/24/2014 7:43:00 PM
Charma,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/24/2014 7:21:00 PM
Wow! Charm, your deeply romantic fountain never dries up....it keeps flowing with enchanting words that sound like music and taste like life-giving elixir. A fav it must be! May I wish you and all your family a very Happy Christmas and all the best for 2015. // paul
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Date: 12/23/2014 10:39:00 PM
Beautiful romantic poem, Charmaine. 7 Blessings and a happy Merry Christmas to you and your family
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Date: 12/23/2014 9:32:00 PM
You have enlightened me by the beauty of your words! I truly loved reading this tremendous poem here this evening! What a magnificent piece, Great Work! Merry Christmas Charmaine!
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Date: 12/23/2014 6:34:00 PM
Before you ever dreamt of my lips I kissed your smile....I love that line sb.....Merry Christmas....hugs and love ...Tim nd :)
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Date: 12/23/2014 5:28:00 PM
beautiful romantic write Charma:-) Hugs Jan
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Date: 12/23/2014 5:13:00 PM
well, this is a beautiful revision, charma and so romantic. gosh, your Christmas time is really close. It must be the day of Xmas Ever where you are!!
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