Just Like Juliet

it's morning again;
i watched the sun yawn across the sky
making its way to my window
but the stars were still in your eyes
and last night's dew, still fresh
as i laid in your arms wanting more
wanting anything but a new day.

i always hated good-byes;
arms locked tightly around one another
lips pressing firmly while tired tongues whispered
"i love you" over and over again
but the hands of time never held still
and we'd start to part, then repeat the process
over and over again holding what we could from night
but day always dressed us
moved us along
left us standing alone.

i saw lover's leap;
it was this big rocky cliff
jutting out of the side of a mountain
and i settled deep in my own thoughts,

i'd like to climb it,
before sunrise,
when the stars are still fresh in your eyes
and the dew still wet between us,

kiss you,
close my eyes 
and whisper "i love you"
over and over again
without having to say good-bye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/23/2019 12:24:00 PM
Wonderful write and I loved it to the core :)
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Date: 11/27/2013 4:10:00 PM
A beautiful, beautiful piece of poetry, Sandra! Very elegantly written! Wonderful work!...Thank you so much for the kind congrats on my poem!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2013 9:52:00 PM
Thank you very much Kelly :)
Date: 11/23/2013 5:56:00 PM
You write so eloquently. Vivid imagery and soft flowing lines. Words that tugged at the heart :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2013 9:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Karen :)
Date: 11/17/2013 5:48:00 PM
This is such a wonderful poem, really enjoyed it!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/17/2013 5:49:00 PM
thank you Arthur....:)
Date: 11/17/2013 11:33:00 AM
what a sentimental and precious write.. i enjoyed the flow of this moment and how it finally ended... a pure delight for human interactions, sandra.. wow:) huggs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/17/2013 12:33:00 PM
Thank you Nette...I am honored that you liked it...you always write so beautifully...my muse finds darkness more than light so I enjoy when she gives me glimpses of light...hugs :)
Date: 11/17/2013 9:45:00 AM
I read this again and if it is possible it seems even more beautiful today. Perhaps it is because I can see you more clearly. You have been given a rare gift. Thanks for sharing it with us. I have moved this to my favorites.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/17/2013 12:31:00 PM
Thank you Richard....I wrote it and held it a couple days... after reading it again myself I was happy with it...I am honored that it found a place in your favorites! :) hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/17/2013 9:47:00 AM
I responded to your comment on my vampire poem.
Date: 11/17/2013 5:16:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully said on the feelings of love, Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/17/2013 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Ravi :) hugs
Date: 11/16/2013 4:49:00 PM
Nice so sweet and beautifully expressed it made me think of days gone by and old romances from yesteryearys. that old song angel of the morning maybe it was before your time but it is so simimliar to this write. cheri
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2013 7:54:00 PM
gosh i remember that song... and thank you Cheri :) hugs
Date: 11/16/2013 4:00:00 PM
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2013 4:12:00 PM
got it thanks :)
Date: 11/16/2013 2:50:00 PM
So Beautiful, I Love The Feel Of This Piece. I Am Trying To Use Up The Capital Letters You You Saved On This Piece. *LOL* all joking aside this is simply outstanding. You are truly gifted.
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Date: 11/16/2013 3:43:00 PM
thank you Richard....there are plenty of caps to go around....hugs :)
Date: 11/16/2013 11:17:00 AM
Oh this is so profound,, such beauty in its sadness,, a feeling of togetherness regardless of the out come...wonderful poetry...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2013 3:42:00 PM
thank you Harry :)
Date: 11/16/2013 8:57:00 AM
Nice expressions on the feelings of love, Sandra
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2013 9:06:00 AM
Thank you Dr Ram :) hugs
Date: 11/16/2013 8:56:00 AM
- Sandra .... oh, so beautiful thoughts in a touching and beautiful poem. - Eternal love, never goodbye - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/16/2013 9:06:00 AM
thank you Anne-lise....that kind of love, when it touches, touches forever... hugs :)
Date: 11/16/2013 8:25:00 AM
speaking of holding on the the feeling and thought, this is it! you make it sound sad but very romantic...
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Wendy Meyer
Date: 11/16/2013 8:28:00 AM
holding onto, i mean
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2013 8:28:00 AM
thank you....sometimes you never want to say goodbye to certain people in life but...sometimes life makes all the choices for you...hugs
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