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Just Like Her

Broken, it's pieces lay around her on the floor shards separated and sharp never to be whole again she looked with tears blurring her vision she saw the painful comparison- to her life- to her broken heart.

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Date: 4/30/2020 2:04:00 AM
Creativity at its best, passion digging deepest. Your voice is powerful here. What an excellent piece.
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Julie Achilles
Date: 5/2/2020 5:31:00 AM
thank you Funom for your kind comments. Stay Safe.
Date: 4/28/2020 8:57:00 AM
What a powerful imagery. It shakes one's heart to its core dearest , Julie. Hugs xxx
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Julie Achilles
Date: 4/29/2020 5:51:00 AM
Thank you, Hugs, Julie xxxx

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