Just Like Her

Broken, it's pieces lay around her on the floor
shards separated and sharp
never to be whole again
she looked with tears blurring her vision
she saw the painful comparison- to her life- to her broken heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Makama Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 2:04 AM
Creativity at its best, passion digging deepest. Your voice is powerful here. What an excellent piece.
Achilles Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 5:31 AM
thank you Funom for your kind comments. Stay Safe.
Trifiatis Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 8:57 AM
What a powerful imagery. It shakes one's heart to its core dearest , Julie. Hugs xxx
Achilles Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 5:51 AM
Thank you, Hugs, Julie xxxx
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