Just Let Me Breathe

Let me breathe,let me step on this earth
to see the wonderful world of god.
More than that,grant me the
wish to be in your arms.
Do not let the love,which
brought both of u together
become a  curse to me ,which makes me
pay a hefty price-i.e. my life.
Kindly do not build me a grave
even before I am born and
do not flush me like waste
for being a girl child.
Is being born as girl such
a crime to you are punishing
me with death?.
please do not fill your heart
with venom instead of love.
I promise to be a good daughter,
take care of you always,
be there for you through thick and thin,
make you proud and laugh.
do not crush my little heart which loves you,
do not break my hands,which craves to hug u.
I am a bundle of happiness not a burden.
Is it too much to ask for a chance
to live and love you?
yes I am girl child,it does not make
me less human.
Just let me have my chance of living and 
do not pluck the bud even  before it blossoms.



[This poem reflects about the most dangerous crime -female foeticide.I hope this kiling stops forever and girl child is embraced .]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 5:33 PM
you have written a very important poem and very poignant words. Good for you. I really like this one.
Shines Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 10:23 AM
thank you so much for reading.have a great day.
Majumdar Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 12:34 AM
It is such a pity that the girl child feels so unwanted in some parts of the subcontinent but times will change.
Shines Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 8:18 AM
thank you so much for reading and yes its really bad that this problem is still there .hope people realise their sins and appreciate girl child.
Iqbal Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 5:55 PM
It kinda breaks my heart.It is a harsh reality that we have to fight.Keep writing.......... writing for cause
Shines Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 2:06 AM
thank you so much for your words.
Murari Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Thats a brilliant poem, Kenisha. I am glad to see a fellow feminist over here. Cheers. Lets make this world a better place. Have a great one!
Shines Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 8:26 AM
thank you so much and have a great weekend :)
Jaisingh Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 12:04 AM
A girl will always be there as a guy won't in tough times.....A daughter is forever and son only till he's needy himself.
Shines Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 3:29 AM
yes true but i wish for gender inequality and a society where everyone is equal.have a great day.
Sharma Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 8:57 AM
VERY HEART RENDERING EMOTIONS OF A GIRL CHILD. SHE TOO HAS THE RIGHT TO LIVE AND DREAM.
Shines Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 9:08 AM
very true and thank you for the comment.
A   Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 10:42 AM
Hello Kenisha, this is a very powerful poem... always~ Linda
Shines Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 2:10 AM
Thank you so much .have a great day :)
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