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Just Last Night

Just last night I had a dream you were there I held you tight. I smiled at you with such delight like watching the sunset into the night. You whispered sweetly into my ear " How I love you my dear". As I held you close that night you then disappeared from my sight. Then it all came back to me the sadness of reality. For I will hold you close no more my heart broken upon the floor. As I sit here in this place the tears will run down my face. I had a dream just last night...... JSergi

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Date: 12/16/2013 8:14:00 PM
Joseph This is a roller coaster of emotion. Happy and loving to sad and lonely. Very nicely done. Thanks for the great comment on my Mystery Man poem. Yes, it is entered into the contest.
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/16/2013 8:24:00 PM
Hi Robin thanks so much for the post and good luck in the contest!!
Date: 11/21/2013 4:45:00 PM
Very emotive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 11/21/2013 5:40:00 PM
Sara thank you for your kind words I am glad you enjoyed it. Joe