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Just Imagine If

Just imagine if when next the heavens opened The rain comprised of kindness and peace Which was caught and bottled To the world released Every drop of water consumed Contained pure kindness and peace Whether it be straight water or not These two virtues would hit the streets Water in every shape and form Natural or processed food or drink Mankind ingesting these two virtues Our world would change in a mere blink Alas, If only it was that simple To heal and mend our troubled earth Troubles created solely by mankind Simply neglecting nature and human worth

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Date: 12/28/2022 3:46:00 PM
WOW!!! I Love this one. Take care, Shirley XX
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Date: 12/21/2022 3:54:00 PM
Add in a little fermented grape juice and you’ve figured world peace, Deb. I’d guzzle, guzzle till I can guzzle no more. Seriously, a splendid notion and a splendid write. Terry
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Date: 12/20/2022 4:05:00 PM
Powerful lines and what great thoughts. Kindness and peace, we sure need more of both. Thanks for sharing your gift.
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Date: 12/20/2022 2:37:00 PM
An aspirational verse Deb, ending with the honest reality about mankind, it’s a crazy world we live in, you may have given me inspiration for a poem down the line, cheers David
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Date: 12/20/2022 10:45:00 AM
If only. Wonderful piece this! xomo
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Date: 12/20/2022 10:30:00 AM
A verse of wisdom Deb what a wonderful world it would be if that happened. Tom
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