Just Imagination

I thought the more focussed, the much better
Thoughts can flow easily like a delicate feather

A feather decorated with arrangements of patterns
Bursting from the dull dreary colors of the ground to the beautiful pale yellow of 
Saturn

Exploration from Saturn to the deep blues of the mysterious sea
Water creatures curious, lively with the current not knowing where they be

Wandering with no knowledge about the outside of their world, these species are 
careless
Following the sounds that the fresh waters possess 

Sweet melodic sound of the rushed waves clashing on shore
Bringing the days end in a swift little roar

The quiet wait for the tics to toc
Everything seems vacant as I slip back to thought

Comfortably overlay-ed by the thought of relaxation
Time to wind down from that brisk vacation

I thought the more focussed, the much better
Thoughts can be disrupted easily like a delicate feather


- Rebecca C*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/2/2011 10:52:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Rebecca. I hope you have a week filled with good health, love, and much inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2011 5:18:00 AM
Yes they really can. Mind tricks are usually never welcome. Though, it can be a push to actually turn it into a reality. Nice job!
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