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Just Hold My Hands and Walk Along

From the valley of mountains to the river banks, Just hold my hand and walk along. Witness the rising sun in the appealing dawn, Let the monsoon wind blow your hair Let the morning star stare this face - Like the moon, lovely and fair. In the evening when we'll sit together - On the chairs of rocks far away from crowd But to the horizon it's so closer. And when you lean your head on my arms, Like The time of dusk just moving slower, Under the green red sky and few stars, Smiling faces, beating hearts but the talks are over When we'll walk along the rivers - Besides the rising sun and glittering water With joyous mind you murmur the songs, And the swans flying in, leaving all fear. Cream white gown embellished with pearls And The reddish scarf which you wear Just walk along holding the hands From the valley of mountains to the river banks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/23/2018 4:45:00 AM
An extremely visionary piece. Thoroughly enjoyed reading!
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 12/27/2018 4:39:00 AM
Thank you Valerie! :)
Date: 4/11/2018 9:29:00 PM
Love the pleasant and colorfully very descriptive verses my friend.
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/11/2018 9:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for the motivating words Robert Lindley .... Regards, Ashok
Date: 4/4/2018 8:37:00 PM
In the valley by the river walking along holding hands with your love. Nice poem Ashok !! All the best....Charlie
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/4/2018 11:07:00 PM
Thank you Charlie!!!! Regards, Ashok
Date: 4/3/2018 6:40:00 AM
Lovely. Such beautiful images. I felt like I was there. :))
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/3/2018 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Patricia!!! I'm so glad you added emotion to this. :) I'm honoured. :)

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