Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

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Just Hold Me- a Collaboration With Shane C

She: 
Just hold me here close to your heart 
Let me stay tranquil a while 
This world has wrested my joy away 
And has robbed me again of my smile

He:
I will hold you forever, part of my soul 
To linger with me until time’s end 
I will bring the joy back to your life 
Your beautiful smile will transcend 

She: 
Just keep me here secure in your arms 
Blissful and unaware of the strife 
There are those around who wish me harm 
Be Protector of my heart and life

He:
Forever I keep you safe in my arms 
Within my soul you shall dwell 
A refuge from the pain of the world 
My love shield, your fear will dispel 


She: 
Calm and soothe me, please, cherish me
And in this haven, let me rest
There is sweetness that here abides
When I am pressed close to your chest

He:
In silent embrace our hearts are one 
Find in me comfort and surcease of soul 
My love shall buoy you through every storm 
As our love the Angels extol

Written by Shane Cooper and Eileen Manassian

Thank you, Shane, for asking me to collaborate with you. I enjoyed it every much. I appreciate your support...Bless you, my dear.

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Charmaine Chircop March 13, 2015 at 4:58 PM Such a romantic poem..So beautiful.Where are you sweet friend.Havent seen you around these three days.Hope all is well dear Eileen Manassian March 13, 2015 at 9:07 PM Hello, my dear. I've been busy with my Dad and Step-mom. They were here for two weeks, and they just left today. It's more than that too. I haven't had the heart to write. On a bit of a low....I become reclusive. I'm in that state right now. I'll se how long it lasts. I will have to ride it out. Thanks for visiting me. Hugs

Shane Cooper March 11, 2015 at 11:53 PM My dearest Enchantress, thank you for permitting me to write with you. It was as a truely wonderful experiance, I fell into your words of need and lost myself in the work. It felt so real as I wrote. Your words are your enchantment of love and need Eileen Manassian March 13, 2015 at 9:08 PM The pleasure was all mine. It was a good experience. You are a great write, Shane. Thanks for asking me to work with you. :) Sorry I didn't answer your post here sooner. As you know...I haven't been well. Thanks for the post.

Casarah Nance March 11, 2015 at 6:04 PM awwww. Love it! You both are amazing :) :) Eileen Manassian March 13, 2015 at 9:09 PM :) Thanks, Cas....Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. I've been on a downer....I did read your latest, though. The Freak one. Cute! I sometimes become a watcher and just read....when I'm able...I comment. Don't give up on me. Hugs

Kp Nunez March 11, 2015 at 12:04 PM Hi Eileen, feels like a tango ( a dance I don't claim to know how to). Though the steps are complicated, the dancers already anticipate the others' move and so the overall result is like one fluid transition to the next. Beautiful 7. Been doing less comments lately, it's tax season, so has been quite busy...Hugs :) Eileen Manassian March 13, 2015 at 9:10 PM Your reason is the taxes....mine is family, work, and depression...we do what we can, my dear. I appreciate the visit. I'm remiss...forgive me. Will try to get to you when I'm out of this present condition. hugs

Emile Pinet March 11, 2015 at 9:40 AM One mind, one heart, one love, feelings that float within our conscious minds and land gently within our hearts. Emile. #7 Eileen Manassian March 13, 2015 at 9:12 PM I enjoyed this write with Shane, Emile. He is a kind hearted man and very supportive. I love to write about romance, so most of my collabs are on that theme. That's the beat of my heart. Sorry I'm late in responding. I haven't been emotionally well and have had a lot of things to attend to at home and work. I appreciate your visits. You know I love your work. Blessings.

David Meade March 10, 2015 at 2:10 PM An outstanding write between two passionate people - many we never discount the comfort of an embrace. 7 Eileen Manassian March 13, 2015 at 9:18 PM Yes, David...I am the one who loves a good hug. My family knows this. How have you been? You've been quiet of late. I've been going through some depression but am slowly working my way out of it again. Sorry I'm late with the reply. Hope you are well.

Richard Lamoureux March 10, 2015 at 8:59 AM You two seem very much in sinc, I enjoyed this romantic piece. Eileen Manassian March 13, 2015 at 9:19 PM Thank you for the visit, Richard. Yes, we were in sync. It was a very easy collab. I'm happy with the results. Shane is a wonderful person and I enjoyed the opportunity to work with him. I'm glad he asked me.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 10, 2015 at 4:16 AM - Dear Eileen what beautiful and romantic collaboration with Shane - I enjoy reading it! - A clear and large 7 to both - I wish you a lovely day !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian March 13, 2015 at 9:21 PM Thank you for your visit, Anne Lise. I haven't been well lately, so I'm late with my response. Forgive me. Hope all is well with you. I know you are going through some difficult times. May you feel God's presence around you.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 10, 2015 at 12:10 AM One of your most beautiful collabs I have read, Eileen...Shane, your amazing pen created something special with Eileen! Incredible write, both of you!! Eileen Manassian March 13, 2015 at 9:22 PM Hello, sweetie. Thank you for your kind and lovely comment. I so appreciate it. :) You always bring joy with your visits. I'm ever grateful. Sorry this is so late, but I've been going through some dark times of late. Please be patient with me. Hugs

Njeri Hunjeri March 9, 2015 at 11:51 PM Beautiful and sensual. Well penned. Deserves a seven! Eileen Manassian March 9, 2015 at 11:59 PM Thank you, Njeri. I wanted to portray the safety that a woman feels in a man's arms. I sent Shane some stanzas and he wrote to those stanzas and then we did a she/he response. I think it worked well, so than you for the seven. I'm sure Shane will be delighted. Hugs