Just Hanging Around

Once in the ghost town they called rotgut
Seen mortician dancing dead mans strut
Six shooter brought Slim down
Black smith hurried left town
Guess hang by boots then when in a rut




Entry For Jerry's 
A Town Called Rotgut
GL All
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 10:38 AM
What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 2:14 PM
a great short way to do it!!! I enjoyed seeing this one.
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 1:11 PM
great limerick good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx
Stella Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 1:15 PM
thanks sounded like fun contest
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