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Just Getting Wet

Just getting wet Saddened By things done and undone, Unhappily I seek to abandon Thoughts of reason, And I step out in drenching rain As angry sky takes revenge On opaque clouds Blocking its vision, Unprepared, I pretend to have fun Trying to convince myself I'm dancing in the rain, But if truth be known I'm just getting wet. January 3, 2018 Placed 1st: Strand Pick 8 Contest by Brian Strand

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Debjani Mitra

Date: 4/11/2020 11:50:00 PM

You made me fall in love with the subtle sadness in your poem

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/12/2020 7:29:00 AM

What a nice thing to say--much appreciate, Debjani--many thanks.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/11/2020 1:46:00 PM

Wonderful, poignant write, Vijay:-) Congratulations on your 1st place win! Awesome job.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/12/2020 7:30:00 AM

Much appreciate Edward--many thanks.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/17/2019 5:33:00 PM

Hi Vijay, I feel the total sadness in this write my friend. Your emotions are strong, painting the sadest canvas. No matter how I feel. once in the rain my mind starts to sing and I forget about the wet. My sadness usually comes with the sun for some reason. A weird bird really. Seriously though, this is an excellent poem my friend. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/5/2018 3:58:00 PM

Such a profound poem, Vijay. Many can relate to this sense of sadness. Outstanding poem w/such emotional depth. Love and joy always.

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/3/2018 7:00:00 PM

I can relate :( Great write dear Vijay! Hugs and smiles :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/4/2018 5:56:00 AM

Thank you Akkina..appreciate the thoughts.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/3/2018 3:55:00 PM

At least you made the effort and tried to change the sad mood, Vijay! Immerse yourself in a nice hot bath instead! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 4:23:00 PM

Thank you Paul..appreciate the thought.

Joseph May

Date: 1/3/2018 3:22:00 PM

It is still a dance though...Very nicely penned Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 4:22:00 PM

So true Joseph..thank you for your comments.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/3/2018 2:30:00 PM

This reminds me of a sign I have in my home that says...life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain. :) Well written Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 2:38:00 PM

A lovely sign you have..a powerful message to live by..thank you Heidi.

Silent One

Date: 1/3/2018 1:25:00 PM

Some days it never stops raining... deep poem Vijay...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 2:36:00 PM

Thank you Silent One--I know what you mean.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/3/2018 12:57:00 PM

Some days you must pretend! I can relate too and I enjoyed this! : )

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 2:35:00 PM

So true..appreciate your comments Connie..many thanks.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/3/2018 9:59:00 AM

A very cleverly expressed piece. The reality is that many are pretending. Just look at the sadness in the eyes of all those selfies.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 2:34:00 PM

So true Richard..you hit the mark..many thanks for your comments.

Tim Smith

Date: 1/3/2018 8:28:00 AM

It is as if you are just going through the motions of life and not living... Wonderful

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 2:34:00 PM

Thank you Tim..appreciate your comments.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/3/2018 8:25:00 AM

Ah! I know the feeling, Vijay, and I hate getting wet, you know:) well written:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Jo for your visit..appreciate your comments.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 1/3/2018 7:33:00 AM

So true and I can relate... Lovely write...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 2:31:00 PM

Thank you Supraja..appreciate your comments..

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/3/2018 7:08:00 AM

Who's truth...One way or the other you will pretend, enjoy the wetting anyway... A conscious one...All blessings to you Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 2:31:00 PM

Thank you Arturo--enjoyed your comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2018 7:04:00 AM

- Many romantic poems are written about the rain ... dancing in the rain .... kissing in the rain ... but you like me just getting wet and cold ... a fact I will say :))) - A great writing, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 2:31:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise--enjoyed your comments.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/3/2018 6:58:00 AM

I like this a lot! We can all relate! Will it help if I open an umbrella ;)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 2:30:00 PM

Thank you Kim..umbrella will help for sure but not much.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/3/2018 6:53:00 AM

Delightfully written my friend, Vijay! Much enjoyed!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2018 2:29:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios.