Just Friends-My Conundrum

Just friends, you say are you and I. For you, I'll try, but it's untrue. I care for you. I can't say why. Oh, how can I, when I'm near you? You reach for me with warm embrace I lose my grace within your arms, enchanted arms. I just can't face this lonely space without your charms. For you, I'll try to be a friend but in the end you'll always know how close I'll grow, my minuend, if life I spend within your glow. For who are you and what am I when lost am I in your blue eyes. My heart's disguise, for you I'll lie, and won't ask why, through tear filled guise.
01-02-17
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Raynes Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Great write, I care for you, but can't say why.... What a great line.
Inman Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 7:10 AM
Thank you for the kind comment Lewis.
Bohto Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 2:42 PM
The last two lines are mine. Love it.
Inman Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:44 PM
So sad for you Holly. Thank you for visiting.
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 1:10 PM
Great rhythm James, congratulations...
Inman Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 12:08 PM
So heartfelt and beautifully written, James. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win in the contest. 7 Sandra
Inman Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Thank you Sandra, I've read many excellent writes in this contest.
Daniel Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 2:49 AM
This one is simply breathtaking, James:) a 7 from me:) your rhymes lend a pleasant feel to this sad write:) congratulations on your top win:)
Inman Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Jo. I appreciate you noticing the rhyme. It was a bit difficult to fit meaningful words into it.
Turner Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 4:37 PM
Great job, James. Congratulations. Very moving indeed!
Inman Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 11:49 AM
Thank you so much Daniel.
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