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Just Forget Me

Just forget me, and walk away, It wasn't meant to be, So why try to stay. Don't look at me, When you walk by, You don't want to see, If I start to cry. If you like her, Then leave me alone, Yet, here you were, Talking on my phone. What is it you miss, Do you remember when, I can't take this, Never see me again. When you do go, Just take my heart, Do I need it, no, You tore it apart. You go your way, And I'll go mine, Don't worry today, Because I'll be fine. Written by: Kelly Deschler For Giorgio V.'s contest - Relate Your Poem To One Of These Quotes The quote I chose was - 6) "Some cause happiness wherever they go; others, whenever they go." - Oscar Wilde

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Date: 12/26/2014 11:59:00 PM
KELLY, Congratulations -- This is a great way to end and start the new year, having your poem featured on the soups front page. Hope your Christmas was a merry one! Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/25/2014 3:19:00 PM
Sometimes its hard for people to forget others , and its a good poem I'll never forget that
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/27/2014 6:53:00 PM
I really appreciate your kind words. Thank you so much for them!
Date: 12/24/2013 7:30:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Merry, Merry Christmas To You And Your Family!!! Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/27/2013 9:44:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara! I hope that you and your family had a great Christmas, and I wish you all the best for the New Year!
Date: 12/20/2013 4:11:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/21/2013 8:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dr. Ram!
Date: 12/19/2013 8:53:00 PM
Kelly, , Congratulations on your awesome win... always~ LINDA
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/21/2013 6:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda!
Date: 12/19/2013 6:33:00 PM
Very nice....congratulations
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/21/2013 7:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, Donna!
Date: 12/19/2013 12:02:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem Kelly in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/21/2013 7:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. I am glad that you enjoyed it!
Date: 12/19/2013 10:17:00 AM
Congrats Kelly!
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Date: 11/25/2013 8:07:00 PM
Kelly These words tug at the heartstrings and make the reader feel your pain and sorrow. You spoke from your heart and soul and it shows. Nice job
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Date: 9/17/2013 10:16:00 AM
You are very good at creative word plays and original ideas. Verse five is positively brilliant! Also an excellent job piecing a plot conforming to such an intricate rhyme scheme, and short lines to boot. This fits the generic form of rhyme but I think it is better placed under the form of "quatrain," which is when there are four lines, the second rhyming with the fourth, or optionally and additionally the first with the third.
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Date: 8/28/2013 8:54:00 PM
sad. . . love found should not be taken for granted, that was not love but deception of the heart, a gal like you is hard to find, if only you would be mine. . . see you got me inspired. .. . . lols
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