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If poetic words were flowers I’d arrange a big bouquet Wrapped in pretty florist paper And would send it on its way. If this bright day were a poem I'd condense it into rhyme, With a ribbon made of sunshine You could open any time. If love were made of sweetest words I'd enfold you carefully. This world could never bring you harm Saved with my poetry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/4/2012 2:05:00 PM
congrats and i must say this poem is amaizing as it stands for everything happy. Thats what the world needs more joyce love and happiness
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Date: 5/4/2012 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 173" Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/1/2012 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM Joyce. A very nice verse.
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Date: 5/1/2012 12:35:00 PM
congrats on your win Joyce
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Date: 5/1/2012 3:12:00 AM
touchy, Joyce. much love.~.O.O.
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:44:00 PM
HELLO, JOYCE! This is pretty;-) It comes in different colors. I love it! Adding this poem to my favorites. I love my wool blanket, it keeps me warm, during the cold days. Here in Texas we only have one month of winter:-) I store my wool blanket in a safe place. Only to store the comfort, for other needy days. I like the way compare the "IF"image of love being like the most softest wool. A very delicate poem. I also wish my days were like poems. It would be nice to open a ribbon everyday. xoxo PD
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:35:00 PM
A poem of a different kind, very beautiful. Ilove the second stanza. Thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla
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Date: 4/30/2012 11:05:00 AM
lovely!
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Date: 4/30/2012 6:04:00 AM
Wow...this is beautifully written all the way!!! Love it Joyce.
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Date: 4/30/2012 5:48:00 AM
Oh..I love it Joyce, it's full of selfless love!!!..Thank you for sharing this...Love Diana
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Date: 4/30/2012 3:22:00 AM
Wonderful poem of expressing love, a new style. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/30/2012 1:12:00 AM
Thank you Joyce for this beautiful written poem today. - Have a lovely new week ! - oxox love from Anne-Lise
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