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A lovely vision caught my eye A pirouetting butterfly, It climbed a sunbeam as it danced As in the air it turned and pranced, In my mind it seemed to be A little ballet... just for me. Entry for Bite Size Poem 4 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier 29/5/2021. Placed 2nd.

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Date: 9/12/2023 6:57:00 AM
Such a DEEP COMPELLING poem good sir might i say some fine literature youve crafted and composed my good sir.
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Date: 2/8/2023 4:01:00 AM
Cute :)
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Date: 3/13/2022 9:34:00 AM
I love this Gary. Poetic excellence! First place for me! Congratulations on your win. Have a great week. A fave! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 12/8/2021 1:31:00 AM
This is just gorgeous! A Fav for me :)
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Date: 11/30/2021 7:43:00 PM
Well penned Gary. Your rhymes have a simple, direct persuasive bend. Most enjoyable. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 9/6/2021 8:56:00 AM
And it was. All of nature is attuned to spirit...even the little butterfly knows the beauty of colors, dance, appreciative eyes and a loving heart. Love your little gem! Great, uplifting read. Thank you.
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/10/2021 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Joe.
Date: 6/6/2021 7:07:00 AM
Wow! What a beauty! Congratulations!
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/6/2021 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Rama. :)
Date: 6/6/2021 7:02:00 AM
A big wow! Congrats!
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/6/2021 7:12:00 AM
Thank you U.W. :)
Date: 6/6/2021 6:43:00 AM
Wow. Congratulations!
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/6/2021 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj. :)
Date: 6/4/2021 7:56:00 AM
Beautiful verse, Gary. I wish you the very best in Line's contest.
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/4/2021 8:28:00 AM
Thank you L. Milton Hankins. :)

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