Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

Just For Me

A lovely vision caught my eye

A pirouetting butterfly,

It climbed a sunbeam as it danced 

As in the air it turned and pranced,

In my mind it seemed to be

A little ballet... just for me.








Entry for
Bite Size Poem 4 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier
29/5/2021. Placed 2nd.

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Beata Agustin December 9, 2025 at 1:20 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Harrison Chan September 12, 2023 at 6:57 AM Such a DEEP COMPELLING poem good sir might i say some fine literature youve crafted and composed my good sir.

Connie Marcum Wong March 13, 2022 at 9:34 AM I love this Gary. Poetic excellence! First place for me! Congratulations on your win. Have a great week. A fave! Blessings xxoo

P.S. Awtry December 8, 2021 at 1:31 AM This is just gorgeous! A Fav for me :)

Brian Sambourne November 30, 2021 at 7:43 PM Well penned Gary. Your rhymes have a simple, direct persuasive bend. Most enjoyable. Best wishes, Brian

Joseph P. DiMino September 6, 2021 at 8:56 AM And it was. All of nature is attuned to spirit...even the little butterfly knows the beauty of colors, dance, appreciative eyes and a loving heart. Love your little gem! Great, uplifting read. Thank you. Gary Smith September 10, 2021 at 8:42 AM Thank you Joe.

Rama Balasubramanian June 6, 2021 at 7:07 AM Wow! What a beauty! Congratulations! Gary Smith June 6, 2021 at 7:12 AM Thank you Rama. :)

Unseeking Seeker June 6, 2021 at 7:02 AM A big wow! Congrats! Gary Smith June 6, 2021 at 7:12 AM Thank you U.W. :)

Christuraj Alex June 6, 2021 at 6:43 AM Wow. Congratulations! Gary Smith June 6, 2021 at 7:13 AM Thank you Christuraj. :)

L Milton Hankins June 4, 2021 at 7:56 AM Beautiful verse, Gary. I wish you the very best in Line's contest. Gary Smith June 4, 2021 at 8:28 AM Thank you L. Milton Hankins. :)