William Kelii Kekaula Poet Senryu

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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 March 03
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just for laughs, again: senryus

Joseph and Mary
had a dear friend named Harry
who loved his dairy

came baby Jesus
then Harry went to pieces
oh this is grievous

babies drink dairy
but not yours trust me Harry
Joseph trust Mary

came Mastiff Hey'Zeus
saw Harry and had figured
puss without its boots

oh Mary Joseph
is Hey'Zeus just visiting
he's your new brother

strange though drinks dairy
oh nice bet you hate won ton
well did plan to change

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Daniel Henry Rodgers March 3, 2024 at 5:05 PM Dear Hilo Poet, Your senryus are like whispers of humor and humanity intertwined. They evoke laughter while gently nudging us to reflect on life's quirks. Through your words, you craft moments of levity amidst the mundane, reminding us to find joy in the absurdity of existence. Thank you for sharing your wit and insight. Your verses are a delightful journey through the whimsical corners of the human experience. - Blessings, Daniel William Kelii Kekaula March 4, 2024 at 8:03 AM You've an eye for detail, Daniel, and an astute one to bat into the spotlight its starry points of measured value. I am indeed grateful for your wondrous thought out expressions that accentuates the heart. Thank you, my friend. Aloha, and blessings as well, William