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Just For Fun

Through a kaleidoscope A physical life in crisis Dying seems imminent Does your life go pasteurize Or is it through gossamer organza A zephyr blowing With vivacity zip In springiness with vitality Straight to the grave
Sometimes the misuse of a word can be funny...
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Fowler Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 6:52 AM
You've done this well Sara! Malapropisms can be intentional or accidental and either way often are hysterical. hugs :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Thanks for the visit and the agreement in that an infelicity can be funny even though wrongly used, etc. LOL..Sara K
Empress Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 3:53 AM
I love the word organza, not many use it though in poetry and i see you use it in such a deeply moving exquisite manner. Lol I know what you mean by misuse of a word, I love the picture you’ve used here goes so well with your write. Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light
Kendrick Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 7:22 AM
IE, Due to the lack of sunlight being so strong today light is nice. Heavy clouds and rain with the possibility of flooding in low lying places or in places where you never thought it would happen. Thanks for the visit today. I like the word organza meaning a thin flowy cloth. Batist is another good one. Sara K
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January 23, 2024 at 6:40 AM
Sara, I adored the ingenuity within this exquisitely crafted poem. Overusing a term can indeed be amusing, I concur.
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 7:20 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the neat review of my work. Sara K
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