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Through a kaleidoscope A physical life in crisis Dying seems imminent Does your life go pasteurize Or is it through gossamer organza A zephyr blowing With vivacity zip In springiness with vitality Straight to the grave Sometimes the misuse of a word can be funny...

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/25/2024 6:52:00 AM

You've done this well Sara! Malapropisms can be intentional or accidental and either way often are hysterical. hugs :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/25/2024 7:23:00 AM

Thanks for the visit and the agreement in that an infelicity can be funny even though wrongly used, etc. LOL..Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 1/24/2024 3:53:00 AM

I love the word organza, not many use it though in poetry and i see you use it in such a deeply moving exquisite manner. Lol I know what you mean by misuse of a word, I love the picture you’ve used here goes so well with your write. Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/25/2024 7:22:00 AM

IE, Due to the lack of sunlight being so strong today light is nice. Heavy clouds and rain with the possibility of flooding in low lying places or in places where you never thought it would happen. Thanks for the visit today. I like the word organza meaning a thin flowy cloth. Batist is another good one. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/23/2024 6:40:00 AM

Sara, I adored the ingenuity within this exquisitely crafted poem. Overusing a term can indeed be amusing, I concur.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2024 7:20:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the neat review of my work. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/23/2024 5:48:00 AM

I agree...misusing a word can be hilarious. Loved the creativity here, Sara K. Have a splendid day, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2024 6:17:00 AM

Thank you, Sara B..I appreciate the visit. Sara K