Just For a Living

There is a huge and old Banyan tree in front of The temple in my village Sitting beneath it At every morning is My habit now But the devotees of the temple Visit me too As they think I am a GOD They offer me many things In fact I am unemployed And decided to consume them Just for a living. spirituality is very easy to sell

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Justcallme Britt

Date: 6/23/2012 8:18:00 AM

WOOOOW! Your message is clear: there ARE people that will do or accept anything for a profit and easier living! Articles such as "a", "an" or "the" only precede nouns. "unemployed" is a verb in your poem so it is grammatically improper to write, "AN unemployed". These errors are small in comparison to such a HUGE message! Very good one, JK <3

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/23/2012 8:58:00 AM

thank you .i have modified this poem as your suggestion .thank you .jk

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/23/2012 2:24:00 AM

This is a wonderful poem,VERY POWERFUL!!!!

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/23/2012 2:51:00 AM

thanks .jk