Just Ducky, Why

JUST DUCKY, WHY?


“Oh, look, my little Johnny’s the only one in step.”
It had always seemed that way,
somehow, no matter how hard he tried
little Johnny just couldn’t seem to get it straight.

He colored outside the lines
just because he thought the hippo
should be a little bigger, rounder,
you know, like a hippo.

He was told by the music teacher
“he couldn’t carry a tune in a bucket”.
Little Johnny didn’t care too much for choir
but he sure liked to sing those alleluia’s - loudly.

He was, or at least was told he was –
too slow for the track team
too short for the basketball team
too soft spoken for the debate team.

That he was, always would be, “a duck out of water”.
“Well, the duck seems pretty happy in the water”
“and always goes back in when he wants to be happy.”
“I wonder what, or where, my water is?”

Over time little Johnny accepted his fate,
celebrated being the only one in step with himself,
colored outside the lines, sang off key and loudly,
understood that he danced to a different tune.

Not much has changed for “little” Johnny.
Oh, he got bigger, accepted his “duck-ness”,
still can’t carry a tune in a bucket,
is still too slow, too short, too soft spoken.

Yet he knows that he is just fast enough,
just tall enough, just loud enough,
and just musical enough for himself
and he wouldn’t have him any other way.


John G. Lawless
2/20/2015

Submitted – Out of Water – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Sheri Fresonke Harper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Chutani Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 12:03 AM
John, a nice poem telling us to stick our neck out, even if out of water. Congrats on the fine win. Mohan
Roper Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 8:20 PM
Back again to congratulate on your wonderful win. Have a wonderful Easter Sunday
Richards Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 5:17 PM
I love how you took the phrase "out of water" and put this twist into your poem. Bless those who step out of water, to be proud of who they are meant to be! :) Congratulations John !!
Haight Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 3:20 PM
John, a huge congratulations to your on your First Place win! Your poem presents such a unique approach to the theme, and I really enjoyed it very much! Sandra
Harper Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:23 PM
John, thanks for making me smile, good fun use of the theme. ! Thanks for entering this very popular contest, we had very many wonderful contributions. Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_bataan_641273
Lawless Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Thank you Sheri for taking the time to administer the contest. Glad you enjoyed my entry
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 10:26 PM
A wonderful verse, good luck in the contest a 7. Blessings Eve
Roper Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 9:19 AM
you must be a military or retired military man, as my husband is
Lawless Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Thanks Eve, I have often been "a duck out of water" as I didn't always work and play well with others.
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