Just Down the Road

Just down the road, I keep on searching. 
What must I do in this life, I keep on asking. 
I almost lost myself in the middle. 
The crossroads seem so misleading. 

I walk down the road to take some fresh air.. 
But pollution surrounded my inner being. 
The toxins penetrate deeply in my veins. 
I'm grasping thin air, I'm suffocating! 

I tried to move my feet in different directions. 
The road is wide, inviting me to walk on. 
Wasn't aware that it's just an illusion. 
Trying to elude me from blazing temptation. 

Just down the road I used to meet a various faces. 
Some are painted with a smile, 
Some are sad and hiding tears. 
Some are part of grande masquerade. 

I came to walk down to see what I've found. 
A narrow walk path going down the aisle. 
The wounded image of a man hung in the cross. 
Lighting up the right way down the road.  
 




** 5th Place in Kelly's Contest JUST DOWN THE ROAD**
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A  Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:23 PM
a super win....SKAT
Mehta Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:12 AM
It's a nice take on the theme of the contest. Congrats on the win, Aiyah
Torres Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 7:37 AM
Thanks a lot for this wonderful treat!! ..:O))
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 4:44 PM
...had to come back, just to say hello...and congratulations!!:)....you can call me SIR :))
Torres Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 7:30 AM
always a pleasure to have your wisdom everyday I open my poems, SIR!!! ..You are one of an inspiration... ^_^ Thanks a lot!!! :O)))
Onclaud Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:19 AM
ohh yeah, aiyah.. you delivered!.. big cheers on your pinay win!.. huggs
Torres Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:22 AM
"ang galing ng pinay"... You said it once... And I learned it from YOU!!! ..:O)) Thanks a lot ,my highness soul sistah!!! ^_^
Deschler Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 8:30 PM
It is so difficult to find people that we can trust these days, but it sounds like you have found one. A very nice write, Aiyah! Congrats on your win!
Torres Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 7:22 AM
once again.. Thank you so much for my placement in your contest, Kelly!!!! ..I feel honoured to be part of it... Your theme is something that I always looked up to create a poem with...And I thank you for considering my entry poem to be one of you winners... :O) More power to you and to your upcoming contests!!! love and peace.. Aiyah ^_^
Dylan Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 3:32 PM
BRAVO AWESOME WRITING,. And Many Blessings TO You.. LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS writing... ... You have a rare talent.. it shines though every word.. Brooke
Torres Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Thank you so much, Brooke!!! You're such angel dear!!! ":O))
Onclaud Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 2:03 PM
i would give anything to walk down that road , aiyah.. very refreshing!.. this is awesome ; you are very good and will only get better the more you write... huggs
Torres Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 2:57 PM
hey nette... i'm still struck whenever I read your comment... my tears wanna fall down, aaahhh...I'm so grateful to have these words from you..THANKS MUCH~!!.. :O)) xoxo
Andresen Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 7:18 AM
- I'm back!! - An amazing well written poem dear friend AiyaH :) - A road we most have gone, I would think - Life can be difficult - Hope all is well with you and your loved ones. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Torres Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 8:41 AM
Oh Anne.. I MISSED YOU!!!! ..how are you now... me, I'm so fine.. and the kids... Thank you for remembering me.. :O)) I'm so glad that you're back!!! Thank you for dropping by on my page.. I missed it~! :O)
Mehta Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Very deep and thought provoking write, iyaih
Torres Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 8:42 AM
Hi Dr. Ram... It's always a pleasure in my heart seeing your comment on my poem... tHanks a lot!! :O))
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 5:50 PM
wow, the ending to this one is super duper!! I like where you took your road, sweetie!!!
Torres Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Hi Andrea.. WOW!!! I so love your comment my sweetest friend... !!! .. Thank you for your time dropping by my page.. I appreciate it so much!!! .. I hope you have a good day =D ... smile!!! :O))
Shiells Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 5:46 PM
Hi Aiyah, Such a deep and tender write of our savior. You expressed this so much from the heart. I hope you win.Will be cheering for you.:~) Peace, Deborah
Torres Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 9:01 AM
Oh my dear friend ,Deb.. Thank you for supporting my little piece... I appreciate your kindness and love so much... Your poems are great too... join them in the contest.. it's FUN!!! TYSM!! xoxoxoxo
Callus Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 3:54 PM
Hi AiyaH....it is not the bright, sparkly, attractive things in life that really count; these can be misleading. It is the little, ordinary ones that can lead us up the path to where we belong. Take care. // paul
Torres Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 9:26 AM
true indeed~~ ...we must not focus our eye to those things that glitter.. for they will be gone by the end of this system... we must lead the way to follow the light.. for He's the only way to life... Thank you Sir Callus!!! :O))
Smith Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 3:51 PM
This is wonderful AiyaH...love the journey..hugs Tim
Torres Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 9:33 AM
Hey Tim!! THanks a lot, man!!! :O))
Nance Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 3:12 PM
Good luck in the contest, a great entry :) Here is a face painted with a smile from me :)
Torres Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Thank you ,Casarah.. you're one sweet darling poet here I look up to.. Thanks for your kind comment!! :O))
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