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Just Doing What You'Re Told

(Funny Children's poem) Peter! Peter! Where are you? I am right here mom I am coming now! That was my mom And she's calling me I'm drinking a glass of milk But I better run or she'll get mad at me Peter! Peter! What was that horrible noise that I just heard coming from the kitchen Tell me that you haven't done anything bad please. Mom, that was my glass of milk, I just dropped it and it broke. Well, I was just doing what you always told me to do. You said that I am supposed to drop anything that I am doing every time that you just...call meeee! LOL! LOL! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2008

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Date: 11/6/2008 6:40:00 AM
This is terrific! The conversation in this write is great. wonderful job.
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Date: 11/6/2008 5:52:00 AM
OMG - kids would love this! As adults will truly appreciate it! So clever! Ah, the mind of a child captured well. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/5/2008 9:17:00 PM
wow sounds like just the kind of smartass comment i would say to my mom LOL! I enjoyed this poem very much
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