Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

Just Doing What You'Re Told

(Funny Children's poem)


Peter! Peter!
Where are you?
I am right here mom
I am coming now!

That was my mom
And she's calling me
I'm drinking a glass of milk
But I better run or she'll get mad at me

Peter! Peter!
What was that horrible noise that
I just heard coming from the kitchen
Tell me that you haven't done anything bad please.

Mom, that was my glass of milk, I just dropped it and it broke.
Well, I was just doing what you always told me to do.
You said that I am supposed to drop anything that
I am doing every time that you just...call meeee!


LOL! LOL!



Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2008

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Christopher Higgins November 6, 2008 at 6:40 AM This is terrific! The conversation in this write is great. wonderful job.

Sharon Winter November 6, 2008 at 5:52 AM OMG - kids would love this! As adults will truly appreciate it! So clever! Ah, the mind of a child captured well. Love, Shar

Jacob Wölf November 5, 2008 at 9:17 PM wow sounds like just the kind of smartass comment i would say to my mom LOL! I enjoyed this poem very much