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Just Desserts

Sleaze Harry is a sick minded dude,
Who’s love life is all camera viewed,
So you won’t see him flirt,
But he’ll photo up-skirt...
Then complain that he hates prison food.

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/28/2015 1:32:00 PM

Glad he made it to jail. lol love phyl

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 4/29/2015 8:08:00 PM

Naught pervert! Another good limerick. / M

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 6/6/2015 8:51:00 PM

Hello Maurice... too right, it might have been another camera that he didn't see that changed his diet - thanks Maurice - Lindsay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2015 7:00:00 PM

haha. Glad he is in prison!!

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 6/6/2015 8:53:00 PM

G'day Andrea... and deservedly so. He'll learn a lot more about upskirting in prison I dare say - thanks Andrea - Lindsay

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/25/2015 6:31:00 AM

funny!!! :)! nice one!~olive eloisa

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 6/6/2015 8:56:00 PM

Thank you Olive for reading and commenting. I'm glad you saw a funny side to it - Lindsay

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/24/2015 6:07:00 AM

good one Lindsay love it hugs 7

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 6/6/2015 8:59:00 PM

Hello Shadow... thanks for reading and commenting. Harry needed his just desserts - thank you Shadow - Lindsay

Jan Allison

Date: 4/22/2015 7:50:00 AM

ha ha ha - my first poem posted here was also called Just deserts lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/22/2015 5:30:00 PM

Hello Jan... I will sneak in and read your poem. I couldn't think of any other name for the sleazy bugger's actions. Thanks Jan - Lindsay

John Williams

Date: 4/22/2015 6:42:00 AM

Wow Lindsay, A terrific limerick----so clever. I think Jack in Canada is in for a lot of competition now. Such a tight write Lindsay, economy of words. clap,clap,clap.........kind regards-----John....PS: that's clap with an L-not crap with an R....hahaha

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/22/2015 5:27:00 PM

G'day John... ah no, I'm just a boy in short pants following all you limerick writers. Your clap statement... did you know that rap as in rap music is spelt with a silent C? Catch you later John - Lindsay

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/22/2015 6:19:00 AM

lol! Good for him! haha...You got the hang of lims now, Lindsay...:)

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/22/2015 5:24:00 PM

Good Morning Kim... do you reckon I'm getting there Kim. I'm actually enjoying writing limericks. It's different to ballads; you have to basically tell a story in around forty syllables. Thank you Kim - Lindsay

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