Jack Horne Poet Senryu

Just Deserts - Just Desserts

she bins
his pizza lunch - -
just desserts

* some silliness on a saying we have: ‘just deserts’ (a person getting what he deserves)

For Dr Ram’s Darkness at Noon contest

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Jan Allison July 6, 2014 at 4:18 AM love the write jack - my first poem posted was also called Just Deserts - must be an English saying. Hugs jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven May 19, 2014 at 3:20 AM Should have read this before I started cooking. Nice one mate.

Phyllis Babcock May 14, 2014 at 10:10 PM Had me smiling again at the gem. Nicely done. love phyl

Joe Maverick May 14, 2014 at 12:24 AM So enjoyed this 'light lunch' you prepared for us Jack, hope the sun is shining in the west today for you, Joe..'

Carolyn Devonshire May 12, 2014 at 5:10 PM LMAO I know you love pizza, Jack! And we have the same saying here. Witty entry for the contest. Hope you pull a big win! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick May 12, 2014 at 9:31 AM Pizza at noon all gone..Creative title..Way to go for the contest..Your presence at my poems was uplifting..Sara

Brooke Dylan May 11, 2014 at 8:14 PM ha ha. good one.. .. good luck in the contest..

Robert Johnson May 11, 2014 at 7:15 PM I'm feeling thick as a brick. Maybe you can help me understand she bins.

Barbara Gorelick May 11, 2014 at 7:12 PM This is so clever..hope you a get a big hurrah at judging time. BG

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2014 at 6:53 PM haha, for DArkness at Noon contest. Yes, now I see.....

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2014 at 6:52 PM I like the play on words. I have a poem somewhere here that is also a play on that same expression, Jack. NICE

Jan Allison May 11, 2014 at 5:12 PM very clever Jack - my first poem I submitted here is also called 'just desserts' hugs jan xx