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Aurora said to Borealis the fools down there they think were playing, why don't they know that we're just dancing, simply dancing with old Sol whose plasma skirt sets us twirling across the atmosphere?

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Date: 2/28/2024 5:36:00 PM
A very creative poem, my friend.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/28/2024 7:37:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 2/28/2024 4:35:00 PM
absolutely beautiful. I loved every line and am impressed with your creativity. Well done!
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/28/2024 7:37:00 PM
Thank you.

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