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Aurora said to Borealis 
the fools down there 
they think were playing,
why don't they know
that we're just dancing,
simply dancing with old Sol 
whose plasma skirt sets us twirling
across the atmosphere?

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Date: 2/28/2024 5:36:00 PM
A very creative poem, my friend.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/28/2024 7:37:00 PM
Thank you.

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