Khalid Albudoor Poet Free verse

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This poem was inspired by Jalal e Din Rumi poem COME

Just Come

Birds and trees
Winds and waves,
These clouds
This majestic dawn 
That fascinating moon
Is Him.

He who was here 
When you were lost 
Searching for him all these nights
This one…That one
This heat…Those beats
Tears and laughs 
You, and I
All those babies 
Is Him.

So…come…come along 
Fear no suffering 
No death
Or pain
Come…my child,
Just come.

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Teddy Kimathi September 8, 2017 at 4:00 AM Serene and beautiful, spiritual words. A splendid piece, Khalid! ;-) Khalid Albudoor September 8, 2017 at 4:20 AM Thank you dear Teddy... :)

Ovidiu Bocsa September 7, 2017 at 7:20 AM Wow! Amazing, touching, wonderful work, verses,thoughts, feelings. Like poet waiting the poetry to fall in love with, like Mutakalems wearing the Holly Words, Like the Prophet of Good News: Welcome. You did it in your way, like Frank Sinatra. It is a wonderful day.Best regards and wishes. Khalid Albudoor September 8, 2017 at 4:22 AM Thank you so much Ovidiu for the kind words...what a wonderful comment :)) Love n' Light, Khalid.

Dave Timperley September 2, 2017 at 6:14 AM Lovely poem Khalid, short and succinct. I read "If God is for me, who can stand against me?" This is a mantra I hold very dear in my heart. God Bless. D. Khalid Albudoor September 2, 2017 at 10:00 AM Thank you, :)

Alfred Berggren August 31, 2017 at 12:44 PM A spiritual poem with a message from God asking a person to come to him. Real depth of meaning. Khalid Albudoor August 31, 2017 at 12:47 PM Thanks Alfred, :)

Nicholas Windle August 31, 2017 at 12:33 PM many thanks for this wonderful piece of work so much love in something that makes all things possible congratulations may your life be blessed Khalid Albudoor August 31, 2017 at 12:44 PM Many thanks to you too dear Nicholas :))

Ayesha Karim August 31, 2017 at 9:01 AM Khaild I love this short poem. It's excellent. With faith like a child. Khalid Albudoor August 31, 2017 at 11:50 AM Thanks Ayesha :)

Frances Schiavina August 31, 2017 at 8:27 AM You are a great poet. Pleas also read my poetry I would love your comments. Khalid Albudoor August 31, 2017 at 11:51 AM Thanks, appreciate your words :)

Luis Estable August 31, 2017 at 7:12 AM I have an idea whom this Him is, but I think the diction doe not do justice to the name and does not go around it successfully and as a result the poem is a failure in my humble judgment. Make some changes to the argument and make it whole and in better understanding the story you tell. Thanks, Luis Estable Khalid Albudoor August 31, 2017 at 12:17 PM Thanks for the comments Luis,

Ovidiu Bocsa August 31, 2017 at 2:47 AM Lovely verses who deserves to be read and appreciated by readers and publishing houses. Good luck, best regards and wishes. Khalid Albudoor August 31, 2017 at 12:16 PM Appreciate you kind and lovely comments, :)

Old Buck August 30, 2017 at 6:13 PM Khalid: I've just finished reading all your works. I'm just a simple rhymer and your work goes beyond that to a place I often don't understand. However: There is a lovely tone in your work that makes them enjoyable even for someone like me. Keep them coming. Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck Khalid Albudoor August 31, 2017 at 12:00 PM Thank you. I usually write in Arabic and translate my poems into English, that's the reason..