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Just Come

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This poem was inspired by Jalal e Din Rumi poem COME

Birds and trees Winds and waves, These clouds This majestic dawn That fascinating moon Is Him. He who was here When you were lost Searching for him all these nights This one…That one This heat…Those beats Tears and laughs You, and I All those babies Is Him. So…come…come along Fear no suffering No death Or pain Come…my child, Just come.

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 9/8/2017 4:00:00 AM

Serene and beautiful, spiritual words. A splendid piece, Khalid! ;-)

Khalid Albudoor
Date: 9/8/2017 4:20:00 AM

Thank you dear Teddy... :)

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 9/7/2017 7:20:00 AM

Wow! Amazing, touching, wonderful work, verses,thoughts, feelings. Like poet waiting the poetry to fall in love with, like Mutakalems wearing the Holly Words, Like the Prophet of Good News: Welcome. You did it in your way, like Frank Sinatra. It is a wonderful day.Best regards and wishes.

Khalid Albudoor
Date: 9/8/2017 4:22:00 AM

Thank you so much Ovidiu for the kind words...what a wonderful comment :)) Love n' Light, Khalid.

Dave Timperley

Date: 9/2/2017 6:14:00 AM

Lovely poem Khalid, short and succinct. I read "If God is for me, who can stand against me?" This is a mantra I hold very dear in my heart. God Bless. D.

Khalid Albudoor
Date: 9/2/2017 10:00:00 AM

Thank you, :)

Alfred Berggren

Date: 8/31/2017 12:44:00 PM

A spiritual poem with a message from God asking a person to come to him. Real depth of meaning.

Khalid Albudoor
Date: 8/31/2017 12:47:00 PM

Thanks Alfred, :)

Nicholas Windle

Date: 8/31/2017 12:33:00 PM

many thanks for this wonderful piece of work so much love in something that makes all things possible congratulations may your life be blessed

Khalid Albudoor
Date: 8/31/2017 12:44:00 PM

Many thanks to you too dear Nicholas :))

Ayesha Karim

Date: 8/31/2017 9:01:00 AM

Khaild I love this short poem. It's excellent. With faith like a child.

Khalid Albudoor
Date: 8/31/2017 11:50:00 AM

Thanks Ayesha :)

Frances Schiavina

Date: 8/31/2017 8:27:00 AM

You are a great poet. Pleas also read my poetry I would love your comments.

Khalid Albudoor
Date: 8/31/2017 11:51:00 AM

Thanks, appreciate your words :)

Luis Estable

Date: 8/31/2017 7:12:00 AM

I have an idea whom this Him is, but I think the diction doe not do justice to the name and does not go around it successfully and as a result the poem is a failure in my humble judgment. Make some changes to the argument and make it whole and in better understanding the story you tell. Thanks, Luis Estable

Khalid Albudoor
Date: 8/31/2017 12:17:00 PM

Thanks for the comments Luis,

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 8/31/2017 2:47:00 AM

Lovely verses who deserves to be read and appreciated by readers and publishing houses. Good luck, best regards and wishes.

Khalid Albudoor
Date: 8/31/2017 12:16:00 PM

Appreciate you kind and lovely comments, :)

Old Buck

Date: 8/30/2017 6:13:00 PM

Khalid: I've just finished reading all your works. I'm just a simple rhymer and your work goes beyond that to a place I often don't understand. However: There is a lovely tone in your work that makes them enjoyable even for someone like me. Keep them coming. Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Khalid Albudoor
Date: 8/31/2017 12:00:00 PM

Thank you. I usually write in Arabic and translate my poems into English, that's the reason..