Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Just Breathe On 'Em

Eighty years old and still motoring along
Not quite as spry but my breath is still strong
Can fend off attackers
A real firecracker
Just breathe on 'em and they succumb before long


© Jack Ellison 2016

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Carol Eastman January 14, 2016 at 11:52 AM Oh My, Oh My! How did I get so far behind... At least John John is back so you probably didn't notice... with all the celebrating going on!... LOL... Me Too! Jack Ellison January 15, 2016 at 7:35 AM It's not a law that you MUST review every one of my poems BUT I sure do appreciate it, dear Carol!!! Love, Jack xox

Judy Konos January 9, 2016 at 7:45 PM AND.....Do dat breath have spirits on it? Are we invited? When, Where...we'll all be there! Chug A Lug til next time..... Jack Ellison January 10, 2016 at 7:18 AM Y'all come, d'ya hear!!! I'm a-waiting... I'll greet you a big tight squeezy hug and a bunch of juicy wet smackers!!!! Love, Jack xoxox

Dalia Shahein January 9, 2016 at 11:00 AM Lol , great write as always, hugs / / :) dalia Jack Ellison January 10, 2016 at 7:19 AM Hello sweetness... hope you day is a happy one! Love ya, girl! xoxox