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Bitesize No99 Poetry Contest

1/28/25

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As the pressures and noise of my world are closing in on me, I breathe in deeply, praying with each breath and breathe out Taking one step at a time and concentrate on just being.

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Date: 1/29/2025 4:35:00 AM
Dear Kathleen, As I read I thought how your words feel like a gentle tug to slow down and find peace in the moment. They carry a beautiful stillness that reflects deeply and I loved it. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 1/29/2025 4:26:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel!
Date: 1/28/2025 8:13:00 PM
'Mindfulness' is all, methinks. ~ gw
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 1/29/2025 3:22:00 AM
Exactly! That and putting one foot in front of the other to do what you gotta do!
Date: 1/28/2025 1:24:00 PM
Absolutely Kathleen!….l hear you! Love this and ‘just being’….Debx
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 1/28/2025 3:33:00 PM
Thanks, Deb!

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