Just Be Here and Hear Me Out

Last time I should've told,
The words I kept always untold.
As days pass and months unfold, 
Our bond grew strong manifold

Just be here and hear me out,
 I need you here and want you now..

You've been through thick, been through thin,
You're so strong, I get courage within.
Never let me down and never will,
You in my heart and that's what it fills.

Just be here and hear me out,
 I need you here and want you now..

The mightiest blow together we hold,
Coz you so strong, be it sunny or cold.
Our triumph  will hide the sorrow we share,
Your absence seems an endless nightmare.. 

Just be here and hear me out, 
I need you here and want you now..

VijayG

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 9/18/2022 2:37:00 AM
This is so well written, just be here and hear me now, yes, perfect!
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Vijay Galia
Date: 9/18/2022 2:44:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/7/2021 8:01:00 AM
Well done Vijay. This is an apology to a loved one. It speaks of the love and genuine respect for ones soul mate and the strength found in your bond. Love it. It's also hard to make every line rhyme. Good job. God Bless, JB
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Vijay Galia
Date: 5/7/2021 9:25:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/7/2021 7:16:00 AM
I can feel this poem. Well expressed in these words. Excellent :)
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Vijay Galia
Date: 5/7/2021 9:25:00 PM
Thanks for your time to read and comment..
Date: 5/7/2021 4:53:00 AM
Much dedication, longing, and love--emotive write speaks boldly in your poem, Vijay.
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Vijay Galia
Date: 5/7/2021 9:26:00 PM
Thanks for reading it.. It means a lot to me Vijayji
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