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Just August

weather in motions, temptation calls from past flames. heavier are hearts, terribly torn from past pain ~ oh, teach us resilience. 07 August 2022 Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/23/2022 6:59:00 AM

Oh! What a write! Congratulations!

Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 8/23/2022 7:28:00 AM

Thank you so much!!! God bless you!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/22/2022 2:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A powerful/wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day.......................

Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 8/22/2022 2:22:00 PM

Thank you so so much :) God bless you!!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/21/2022 11:40:00 PM

I like the metaphor of the weather expressing the painful mood. Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings xxoo

Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 8/21/2022 11:59:00 PM

Cold nights are so tempting...haha, thank you so much Connie. God bless you!!! xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2022 9:00:00 PM

This one feels grim but the last line is a wowser! Congrats in my contest

Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 8/21/2022 11:58:00 PM

Thank you so much for the Contest, much appreciated for the win. God bless you!!!