Just August

weather in motions,
temptation calls from past flames.
heavier are hearts,
terribly torn from past pain ~
oh, teach us resilience. 

07 August 2022
Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Alex Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 6:59 AM
Oh! What a write! Congratulations!
Zamambo Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Thank you so much!!! God bless you!!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 2:19 PM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful/wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day.......................
Zamambo Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 2:22 PM
Thank you so so much :) God bless you!!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 11:40 PM
I like the metaphor of the weather expressing the painful mood. Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings xxoo
Zamambo Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 11:59 PM
Cold nights are so tempting...haha, thank you so much Connie. God bless you!!! xxx
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 9:00 PM
This one feels grim but the last line is a wowser! Congrats in my contest
Zamambo Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 11:58 PM
Thank you so much for the Contest, much appreciated for the win. God bless you!!!
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