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Just As Lonely As You

I see you gazing east chasing a nebulous dream, forgetting it was a while ago when morning sun cheered your grin. I, on the other hand, cherish the west, for it paints your lovely sunset with bursts of orange and red, as a silhouette longingly meanders in your stead. I'm willing to trade my spot to see the other side of things. Perhaps you will agree, there is another point of view just as lonely as you, if you could just turn around to embrace the moon. November 15, 2017 Placed 2nd: Strand select T contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 11/19/2017 12:07:00 AM
Your ideas are always so unique; this is perfect!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thanks for the visit Sneha--haven't seen your work lately!
Date: 11/18/2017 5:16:00 PM
Great expression Vijay! This a wonderful poem and your last stanza is perfect. I can really relate to your words here.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 7:00:00 AM
Thank you James!
Date: 11/16/2017 9:36:00 PM
I love your take on trading spots to see the other side of things. How imaginative. Great write as always Vijay...Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 7:15:00 AM
Thank you Maria!
Date: 11/16/2017 2:27:00 PM
- Always better to be together ... even the moonlight will shine more beautifully - A beautiful and touching poem, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/16/2017 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/15/2017 3:35:00 PM
Excellent writing Vijay. I really enjoyed this! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/15/2017 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 11/15/2017 12:03:00 PM
Vijay, beautifully expressed!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/15/2017 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Akkina!
Date: 11/15/2017 8:29:00 AM
Vijay Very creative....stellar word play.....off the page writing! Bravo!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/15/2017 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Chuck!
Date: 11/15/2017 8:20:00 AM
This is quite well expressed!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/15/2017 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Richard!
Date: 11/15/2017 7:48:00 AM
Your last line brought the message home...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/15/2017 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Arturo!

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