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Just Another Sad Poem

Today there's no more wind in my sails
      Today rainbows doesn't exist at all
      Today the frog is still a Green frog 
      Today the damn has busted beyond repair 
      Today the sun has abandoned me
      Today all the flowers has withered and died
      Today the ache in my heart has magnified 
      Today I need a heart surgeon to fix my broken heart








11-10-16
Alexis Y

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2016 8:18:00 PM

This is how I felt toward the end of election day. What was the cause for you, Alexis? I really like the emotion with which you wrote these lines.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 11/10/2016 5:16:00 PM

Today is a day we all have all our lives. You express the blues such a day feels like and the weight of those blues as well. BUT never forget that because of days like 'today', joy days are even sweeter and more appreciated. A sad write, Alexis - you are blessed as a writer to feel life and grow from those feelings. Poetry hugs, CayCay

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/10/2016 3:17:00 PM

Such a sad poem, Alexis. I hope something positive comes along and cheer up that pen. But I do appreciate the sadness conveyed in your words. It makes you do as the Jacksons sung about: think about the good times. Love always.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/10/2016 2:18:00 PM

aww Alexis this is so so sad:-( hugs Jan xx

Carol B.

Date: 11/10/2016 1:17:00 PM

Alexis, You're one of the sweetest and supportive people on this site. I love your poetry and the kindness you show others. Hoping your heart mends soon.

Chris Green

Date: 11/10/2016 9:29:00 AM

Ok, now this wasn't fun, what's up with this? Broken hearts are serious conditions, though I have been known to perform heart surgery very successfully at times. :) Too sad Alexis, too, too sad. Hope you find your smile again real soon. I do have one question though, what color did you expect the green frog to be? :)

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/10/2016 9:22:00 AM

Another sad poem inspires the biggest hugs! cominatcha - huggadoodlootchies! ~ j

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/10/2016 12:36:00 PM

Aww..Thank you very much. I always welcome a hug sad or not:) Alexis

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/10/2016 8:20:00 AM

Alexis I hope this is fictional. You are an amazing person. You have been nothing but kind and giving to me. Your comments on my poem mean so much to me. You always put a smile on my face. I thank you for that. Lots and Lots of love, always, armand.