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Just Another Depressing Poem

I've been cryin', No one seems to care. I'm slowly dyin', Ripped out my last hair. Someone pull the trigger, I'll be gone. The pain gets bigger, But the hurt won't last long. Here I lay, I am shattered, Felt all kinds of pain. I have wrecked myself, I'm battered, What more could I possibly gain?

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Skat A

Date: 5/10/2015 10:49:00 AM

Jessie :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love

Skat A

Date: 4/26/2015 1:09:00 AM

Jessie, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2015 10:37:00 PM

WOW, so deep and painful. Jessie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/21/2015 1:59:00 PM

- Hello Jessie :) - I want to welcome you to the P-Soup - You have come to the right place, here you will find many talented poets :) - Share your work, try two get some "poets" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)