Just Another Break of Day

I hang my dreams 
on the last of stars
as they cling
on this lifeless sky 

somewhere 
in this darkened plain
my thoughts 
leave me 
more blushed
than the predawn sky 

warmth 
touches back
emotionless
in westerly breezes 
while jet streams
smile back
in tangerine streams 
as day breaks
its silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 11/12/2019 5:57:00 AM
Another beautiful sunrise as day breaks it's silence. Beautifully penned, Sandy. Hugs, John
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2019 9:43:00 AM
Thank you John...i am blessed to see each sunrise mother nature has to offer and each sunset this time of year... some inspire me more than others but they are all beautiful... hugs
Date: 11/11/2019 11:28:00 AM
Lovely, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/11/2019 12:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Line :) hugs
Date: 11/11/2019 9:36:00 AM
- Beautiful, Sandra - Are you a bus driver ? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2019 3:07:00 AM
- Cool :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/11/2019 9:44:00 AM
I am my friend....23 years of driving little kids to school... day break never gets old... thank you :) hugs
Date: 11/11/2019 8:13:00 AM
Dreams hanging on the break of dawn--that leave you in blush--will always bring warmth in a new day. Excellent imagery in your daybreak my friend--your pen shines, Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/11/2019 9:43:00 AM
thank you my friend...we will have a little sun, then the rains will move in...one of the favorite parts of my job are watching the sunrise day after day...no two are ever identical :) hugs
Date: 11/11/2019 7:51:00 AM
just beautiful sweet Sandy. Your muse always amazes me, everyday. I may not comment on all your poems, but that's just me- I read and LOVE ALL of them. Thanks for another wonderful poem of depth with your metaphorical muse....x:-)-luloo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/11/2019 9:40:00 AM
Good morning my beautiful friend....these scribbles sometimes haunt my mind... nature just offers so many things to enjoy especially when you are up before the sun... hugs :)
Date: 11/11/2019 6:59:00 AM
And the beauty of the new day is only enhance by the beauty of your words my friend. Good morning Sandy. Such a soft and endearing poem that touches the morning heart.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/11/2019 7:23:00 AM
Good morning Chris. Glad you enjoyed my morning bus scribbles. Nature is always so beautiful:) thank you my friend. Hugs
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