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Robert J. Lindley, 9-24-2017
Rhyme( A Tribute To My Father)

NOTE: Greatest blessing in my life was to know, love and be loved by this brave and kind man.
I have labored on writing this tribute poem for about 9 weeks now. Leaving it, coming back,making changes.
Always trying to improve it, as nothing seemed good enough.
Then I finally saw the light, my father tho' extremely intelligent was still a simple man.
One that believed good triumphs over evil, that people are only human and thus they should not be judged against a perfection yardstick.
For weeks I sought perfection to honor him, one I so dearly love.
Then he seemed to say to me this morn-- " son, when love is true it is already perfection, regardless of how its presented."
With that in mind, I finished this poem today. And hope you may enjoy it and think beautiful and loving thoughts/memories of your own father, be he now living or passed on as is mine..

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Total # Syllables: 224
Total # Words: 212

Just An Old Man Just an old man I came to know his mind still busy, feet were slow. Tired feet lounged in old, worn shoes he had lived, lived and paid his dues! An old man, one I always loved one who taught me to fight when shoved. Showed me to be kind when one could how to work hard and saw firewood! An old man, long ago I knew taught me to say, yes sir on cue. Suffered to give more than he had to raise good sons, not to be bad! An old man, one God took away taught me true love and how to pray. Gave his kind heart and gave his all to teach me to stand proud and tall! An old man, that never forgot to aid me, were I on the spot. Old man that gave, not being asked in that bright light, this soul once basked! Just an old man, so brave and true wore the old, to buy me the new. An old man, one I so cherish I pray to meet, when I perish! An old man, one I hope to see that good son, he raised me to be. Just an old man, one that loved me pray I, to one day be as he! Robert J. Lindley, 9-24-2017 Rhyme( A Tribute To My Father) NOTE: Greatest blessing in my life was to know, love and be loved by this brave and kind man. He passed away in his sleep on the morning of his 68th birthday. I have labored on writing this tribute poem for about 9 weeks now. Leaving it, coming back,making changes. Always trying to improve it, as nothing seemed good enough. Then I finally saw the light, my father tho' extremely intelligent was still a simple man. One that believed good triumphs over evil, that people are only human and thus they should not be judged against a perfection yardstick. For weeks I sought perfection to honor him, one I so dearly love. Then he seemed to say to me this morn-- " son, when love is true it is already perfection, regardless of how its presented." With that in mind, I finished this poem today. And hope you may enjoy it and think beautiful and loving thoughts/memories of your father, be he now living or passed on as is mine..

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Date: 9/29/2017 8:05:00 AM
Thank you my friends for such kind and encouraging comments on this tribute poem.. I hope you were all blessed as well, with having such a loving and fantastic father. I lost mine at age 15 and it had a most profound effect upon my life. One that I almost did not recover from..
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Date: 9/29/2017 8:04:00 AM
Thank you my friends for such kind and encouraging comments on this tribute poem.. I hope you were all blessed as well, with having such a loving and fantastic father. I lost mine at age 15 and it had a most profound effect upon my life. One that I almost did not recover from..
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Date: 9/29/2017 7:48:00 AM
I am glad to see that the relationship between you and your father left such a positive effect on you and your life, Robert, and the memories are there to be treasured. I am sure he was/is proud of you! Best regards my friend....paul
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Date: 9/28/2017 9:50:00 AM
What an excellent tribute to your father Robert, the words touched me deeply. I lost my father when he was 59, died in his sleep in the hospital. I had a wonderful father who taught me much, would that he had a son worthy of him. I can relate to this piece and it did bring back memories to me. You are an excellent poet Robert, it is my honour to call you friend. Your friend always....Mike. A fave.
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Date: 9/26/2017 4:36:00 PM
A beautiful tribute Robert. Your words so heartfelt and loving, I am quite touched. Your notes are wonderful, I appreciate your efforts to allow us insight into your thought process. thank you. You are an amazing poet and dear friend. many blessings to you xo
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Date: 9/26/2017 11:23:00 AM
Well, Robert, my envy is usually confined to a poem I might wish I had written-- but here I wish I had had the kind of relationship with my father that you had.
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Date: 9/25/2017 9:17:00 AM
Absolutely amazing touching poem my friend, your words touch my heart.. You are an amazing poet, even in the face of adversity..
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Date: 9/24/2017 6:15:00 PM
Robert he was lucky to have such a son. Who remembers him even now with love and honour. I am sure to him you are perfection.
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Date: 9/24/2017 4:10:00 PM
Aw, this is so nice. My father died when I was sixteen months old. I still wish I could've known him. The movie, "Field of Dreams", absolutely wrecked me, not to mention the movie, "Frequency".
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Date: 9/24/2017 3:01:00 PM
This is perfection!! I feel the love you have for your father. This piece really touched me. I love my father with all my heart. You were blessed. :)
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Date: 9/24/2017 11:57:00 AM
Wow! This is such a lovely tribute to your father, Robert, I like this very much, am adding it to my favourites:)
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Date: 9/24/2017 11:50:00 AM
what a wonderful tribute Robert and I think the message came from your father giving you his blessing to post your poem!:-) hugs jan xx
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