Just An Empty Shell

Sad
Does not
Begin to
Express my thoughts
Words fail to explain the emotion felt

The abject disappointment when the last 
Pistachio
Is but an 
Empty
Shell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Culverhouse Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 3:05 PM
so sad....I like those little make me work for 'em nutz!
Mehta Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 1:50 PM
Nicely worded write, Nick
Zzzzz Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 4:47 AM
A good creative write, with a fun ending.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 4:33 AM
wow Nick how imaginative is this write and u certainly had me going thinking it was about luv.. great one..and pistachios are my fav nut ..but ...am allergic to them all now ..oh.. super title ..luv..
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