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Just An Empty Shell

Sad Does not Begin to Express my thoughts Words fail to explain the emotion felt The abject disappointment when the last Pistachio Is but an Empty Shell

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/22/2011 3:05:00 PM

so sad....I like those little make me work for 'em nutz!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/21/2011 1:50:00 PM

Nicely worded write, Nick

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/21/2011 4:47:00 AM

A good creative write, with a fun ending.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/21/2011 4:33:00 AM

wow Nick how imaginative is this write and u certainly had me going thinking it was about luv.. great one..and pistachios are my fav nut ..but ...am allergic to them all now ..oh.. super title ..luv..