The Situation Poet Quintain (English)

Just a Whisper

silver cresent in the sky
with silent stars and distant eyes
reaping with your silver claw
all the sin that God saw

digging into guilty flesh
darkness the theme of her caress
creeping with evil cohorts
for a few the very last resort

wittness to the crimes of time
will you tell the secrets mine
moonlight not the helper of crime
but the shinning light of the Divine

eye's of a secret spy
seeing reasons that men cry
just a whisper of the light
a reveiler of aweful sights

with the mirage of darkness comes fright
shadows of monsters creatures of the night
dozens of thing that are not right
even the sins of lovers delight

friend of lovers Queen of night
just a whisper of the light 
when the end comes we wonder who
who you'll tell your secrets to

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Debbie Duncan October 3, 2012 at 11:27 PM this is awesome ,,, from beginning to end,,, you have a most awesome ;}

Charmaine Chircop February 3, 2012 at 7:50 AM SO Happy to be here and read this wonderful poem with so much to question in the end..lovely..Charma

Jack Horne January 25, 2012 at 12:56 PM lovely write, my friend

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 25, 2012 at 9:28 AM most powerful and poignant write luv.. so intense are each line.. so appreciate all the sweet co,ments and encouraging words u have commented to me during this time in my life.. God has blessed me so much .. and I want to be a ble3ssding to others by my words and spirit.. u are a part of my recovery process and I am so thankful..luv..

Elizabeth Wesley January 25, 2012 at 8:18 AM Back again to start my day with words that give my mind a new vision for the day! PS you are mopre of an experience that a sistuation :)

Lisa Cooper January 25, 2012 at 4:09 AM wow very sentual and mysterious pen! Lovely!

Debra Squyres January 24, 2012 at 8:16 AM She is a beautiful thing to behold...love the mysterious vibe in this poem. I'm sure if she could talk...her stories would be enlightening !!

Judy Ball January 24, 2012 at 1:49 AM She whispers them in the ear of God my friend. Nice job heere. Beautifully wrotten. God Bless, JB

M.I.A . January 24, 2012 at 1:38 AM mysterious yet also soul-searching. i'll have to read it again to feel more. Thank you stopping by TS

Brenda Victoria Northeast January 23, 2012 at 8:44 PM Love this poem- reveals indeed- God's light is everywhere even in the darkness. Re; what is lorikeet's; I wrote a description for you under your question on my poem. : )

Doris Culverhouse January 23, 2012 at 7:09 PM Who indeed?? sounds like a naughty tom....

Elizabeth Wesley January 23, 2012 at 6:53 PM Only you did it better! :) I feel honored you would think that much of it and thank you for the compliment. This one of yours is a real adventure with some exquisite imagery. Beautifully done! Hugs to you, Lizzie