Just a Thought-
I feel a lot of my written words are full of constipation.
Like I am missing the true flow
A great poet has.
Especially in a rhyme that means
amazing things to me.
How does one
succumb?
Into the world where it writes it's self?
I know how to let the pen flow freely, and it does
without thought-
and perhaps too much feeling....
But friends! Please do share with me
Your unique mystery...
This is as serious as I can get. A good example are the first 5 winners of the Animal
Speak Contest. All flow so well, a few hypnotic.
I am searching, please friends-
Help me find the way.
Amy
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