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JUST A SOUL

Peeling off identities mould A heavy weight lifted off me My reflection crystal clear As I see a disconnection From times heavy and old A yearning whisper echoes Through the looking glass I seize my heart that slips so fast The kinder me in a silent plea Unravels the riddles with love To set my truest self free And in a moments truth I see A puzzle solved, this facet in me My soul attached calling out to me My true narrative now slowly revealed 27.6.24

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/5/2024 7:50:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Carol Mitra
Date: 9/5/2024 7:54:00 AM

Thank you dear Beata..... For your blessing and beautiful thoughts.... Praise the Lord and you stay well :)

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/2/2024 10:01:00 PM

Beautiful poem dear poet. Congratulations on your win.

Carol Mitra
Date: 7/3/2024 12:49:00 AM

Thank you :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/27/2024 9:16:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Just A Soul" write. Great Ending... Have a Blessed day writing away..............

Carol Mitra
Date: 6/27/2024 9:22:00 AM

Hi dear Paula..... Thank you and same to you :)

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/27/2024 5:46:00 AM

Dear Carol, I enjoyed this introspective and wonderfully rhymed write of yours. Blessings to you and enjoy the day..

Carol Mitra
Date: 6/27/2024 9:19:00 AM

Hi Nancy so glad you liked my poem.... Thank you and you too have a wonderful day :)