Carol Mitra Poet Free verse

JUST A SOUL

Peeling off identities mould
A heavy weight lifted off me
My reflection crystal clear
As I see a disconnection 
From times heavy and old
A yearning whisper echoes
Through the looking glass
I seize my heart that slips so fast
The kinder me in a silent plea
Unravels the riddles with love
To set my truest self free
And in a moments truth I see
A puzzle solved, this facet in me
My soul attached calling out to me
My true narrative now slowly revealed

27.6.24

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Beata Agustin September 5, 2024 at 7:50 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Carol Mitra September 5, 2024 at 7:54 AM Thank you dear Beata..... For your blessing and beautiful thoughts.... Praise the Lord and you stay well :)

thriveni c mysore July 2, 2024 at 10:01 PM Beautiful poem dear poet. Congratulations on your win. Carol Mitra July 3, 2024 at 12:49 AM Thank you :)

Paula Goldsmith June 27, 2024 at 9:16 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Just A Soul" write. Great Ending...   Have a Blessed day writing away.............. Carol Mitra June 27, 2024 at 9:22 AM Hi dear Paula..... Thank you and same to you :)

Nancy Kaufman June 27, 2024 at 5:46 AM Dear Carol, I enjoyed this introspective and wonderfully rhymed write of yours. Blessings to you and enjoy the day.. Carol Mitra June 27, 2024 at 9:19 AM Hi Nancy so glad you liked my poem.... Thank you and you too have a wonderful day :)