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Just a Note

Just a note


When our dreams become our life
Waking moments become haunting nightmares
Existence fades as reality runs away
  
    By Arthur Vaso 2016

    Inspired by the poem by Charmaine Chircop



Just A Note 

When our dream becomes our life

Waking moments would be only

an existence of who We truly are.

	By Charmaine Chircop 2016

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Casarah Nance November 17, 2016 at 5:33 PM both are brilliant. Arthur Vaso November 17, 2016 at 8:14 PM Those are words I can find absolutely no fault with!!! :)

Charmaine Chircop November 10, 2016 at 4:34 PM Oh Arthur...Your Just A.Note is much more powerful than mine..I really love were.it lead you... Those haunting nightmares.can indeed be dark...A fave. Im honoured my little scribble inspired one of my fave. Poets on soup. Arthur Vaso November 17, 2016 at 8:13 PM You are such an inspiration! hugs! Look at comment above you!

Chris Green November 7, 2016 at 3:06 PM Really nice Arthur. Charmaine is an inspiration to us all. You poem should make her smile. Arthur Vaso November 17, 2016 at 8:12 PM Thank you Chris, she sure is!

Tim Smith November 7, 2016 at 11:00 AM I like your twist Arthur or is that twisted. Arthur Vaso November 17, 2016 at 8:12 PM Lemon twist!