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Just a Note

Just a note


When our dreams become our life
Waking moments become haunting nightmares
Existence fades as reality runs away
  
    By Arthur Vaso 2016

    Inspired by the poem by Charmaine Chircop



Just A Note 

When our dream becomes our life

Waking moments would be only

an existence of who We truly are.

	By Charmaine Chircop 2016

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Casarah Nance Date: 11/17/2016 5:33:00 PM both are brilliant. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 11/17/2016 8:14:00 PM Those are words I can find absolutely no fault with!!! :)

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/10/2016 4:34:00 PM Oh Arthur...Your Just A.Note is much more powerful than mine..I really love were.it lead you... Those haunting nightmares.can indeed be dark...A fave. Im honoured my little scribble inspired one of my fave. Poets on soup. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 11/17/2016 8:13:00 PM You are such an inspiration! hugs! Look at comment above you!

Chris Green Date: 11/7/2016 3:06:00 PM Really nice Arthur. Charmaine is an inspiration to us all. You poem should make her smile. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 11/17/2016 8:12:00 PM Thank you Chris, she sure is!

Tim Smith Date: 11/7/2016 11:00:00 AM I like your twist Arthur or is that twisted. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 11/17/2016 8:12:00 PM Lemon twist!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/6/2016 7:05:00 PM I was expecting to be fooled a second time. You might need to explain your perspective to me on this one. I personally love it when my dreams come true. Living dreams is a tremendous gift. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 11/6/2016 7:08:00 PM Thanks Richard, I love dreaming, I was more or less being the ying to the yan, about someone losing their mind.