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Just a Love

Just a love

Kiss, touch, the giving to my heart
I want to feel it. Where is this life?

Am I up? Or down? I cannot find it
Get a suffering heart, get it to be life

Just for
Eternal love

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Jeanette Swan

January 1, 2025 at 3:00 AM

This little poem has an ache in it. I like that it is simple, and spaced out so the questions hang in the air. Suffering and grief may be a season. Eternal love is from above, and comes from suffering, as I understand it. J :)

Vilmos Zoltan Galyo

January 2, 2025 at 6:33 AM

Thank you, dear Jeanette!

James Peranteau

December 28, 2024 at 9:27 PM

change mind love to body love...trust you me; 'tiz call'd, "fall'n in love" dear poet...ya love em al'lup, and one will need you more and more, then, trust ensuez, and if ya both pass this test, it becomez love; where husbands and wivez are made...Happy New Year....much love

Darlene De Beaulieu

December 28, 2024 at 10:03 AM

Hello Viltan, It takes time to find the right person to love. Love has to grow between two people. it takes time to know each other. Happy New Year. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

December 28, 2024 at 10:12 AM

Happy new year. All the best for the New Year. /Darlene/

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