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Just a Little Dense

Little Princess stands at the the wide garden gate Looking beyond, longs for total freedom Not understanding what could be her fate In the wild open space, woods, garden plum Where birds, Coyote, BobCats congregate Or on the lane into town where fast cars Hurriedly speed along, as if just out gate But Cosmos, wise one, says what if trapped in jars Contained within a limited space child Same things to look at everyday, corraled here Be thankful for freedom you have, one that's wild Little one running to and fro even sees deer Princess just can't understand repaired fence Seems she might be just a little dense Contest:Choices Sponsor: Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/6/2011 3:45:00 PM
Sounds like a little dog longing to run free and not knowing the dangers that exist just outside the gate. AAA sweet read with good imagery. Nice job my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/4/2011 11:17:00 AM
LIttle Princess hopefully will understand one day. This is an interesting sonnet from you, Sara. I enjoyed seeing it today. LUv, andrea
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Date: 7/3/2011 11:10:00 AM
hey are yo at home? or di you go some where?
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Date: 7/1/2011 11:07:00 AM
Sorry Sara, i must have been commenting on Nettes before and was on (auto pilot) or something..no no not (on something) ha ha..
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Date: 7/1/2011 10:50:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Sara. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/30/2011 5:39:00 PM
This was a wonderfully penned write my friend.. We take for granted our freedom sometimes. cory
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Date: 6/30/2011 3:00:00 PM
Beautiful and stunning write on freedom
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Date: 6/30/2011 2:31:00 PM
Enjoyed the danger freedom and fear, you have liberated here Nette..
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