Just a Little Bit of Sugar

From your two transparent blue oceans Where the sky has sprinkled Its two handfuls of dream Wind is wild like school children From that laughter into my dark corners Can you please give me with your palm Just a little bit of the granules of sugar From those smiling sparkling swirling eyes Where the blue of sea mingle with the white of sky Where from morning till night Ever blooming stories sprinkle delight From the sweet whispers of the starry night Just a little bit of sugar for my twilight Can you give me Or else what for this petalled unfolding every day Upon the sand that the sun has almost forgotten On the shoulder where the hair lays caress In a dream in midair still Weaves tales of wild hare On the moons where clouds still grow and swell What for this everyday bread and butter Without just a little bit of sugar From you For my hue Just a slice of window I seek before my eye lashes From your green and orange game Not just an onlooker A little bit of sugar too _____________________________________________________________ For the poetry contest: Just a Little Bit of Sugar Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzie

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Date: 2/22/2017 6:48:00 AM
Beautiful, Probir:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/22/2017 7:25:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/21/2017 11:45:00 AM
Wow! You really shine on this poem, Probir. I agree w/the other talented poetesses/poets that this is one impressive poem. So many memorable lines. My favorite is ... on the moons where clouds still grow and swell. Such beautiful imagery. Magnificent poem. And the rising interlocking cups of sugar form of this poem ... pure creative genius. You are the man, for real. A 7 and a fave. Two spoons of sugar for you. Love and more love to you and yours. Romantic Warrior
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Date: 2/22/2017 7:26:00 AM
Thank you, Freddie ...
Date: 2/21/2017 7:23:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this well written poem Probir, good luck in contest, Roy.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2017 10:57:00 AM
Thank you for reading and the appreciation ...
Date: 2/19/2017 10:34:00 PM
Hi Probir, what a lovely Lyric, good luck in the contest and take care........Vera
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/20/2017 1:20:00 AM
Thank you, Vera ...
Date: 2/19/2017 6:27:00 PM
"Everyday bread and butter w/o just a little sugar." Great phrase, Probir. Good luck my friend.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/20/2017 1:21:00 AM
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Date: 2/19/2017 1:29:00 PM
- Impressive poem with that title, very well done Probir - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/20/2017 1:21:00 AM
Thank you, Anne ...
Date: 2/19/2017 11:37:00 AM
Wow Probir! What an excellent poem! I hope it is a winner in the contest. Very well done :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/20/2017 1:22:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Date: 2/19/2017 10:20:00 AM
Those last four lines in a great poem, those last lines, are wonderful: Just a slice of window I seek before my eye lashes.... beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/20/2017 1:22:00 AM
Thank you, Darren ...
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