Just a Kiss Away

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Barefoot in the sand I walk the seashore, carefree  
taking mental snapshots of you and me;
Living in the sanctuary of your natural agility
I am a womb in you, both beautiful and free.    
When you pour me out my soul refreshes,   
some say you are water but I say you are life. 
Recaptured, I regain my sanity and dignity    
and for this, I thank you water;  
The seashores are quenched  by your ebb and flow 
and your eternal movements, are my Saving Grace;
You are self sufficient and unanimously rhythmed
and in your cadence even the mermaids rejoice,   
as they dip their tails and siren your decree.  
Oh sea, you are just a kiss away from me, 
when I'm in your presence nothing in this world 
matters, anymore.

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Date: 4/3/2023 2:16:00 AM
Stupendous writing. Such great imagery.
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Date: 4/3/2023 3:16:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Victor. it warms my heart
Date: 4/2/2023 12:49:00 PM
I agree, there is something so calming and carefree about water, its almost as if our troubles float away on it... This beautiful poem brought some much needed tranquility into my day. Thank you for that :)
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Date: 4/2/2023 6:04:00 PM
Thank you Kelly for stopping by
Date: 4/2/2023 4:12:00 AM
The soothing calmness of the vast ocean, beautifully penned, Mystic Rose, enjoyed
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Date: 4/2/2023 6:03:00 PM
Thank you Seeker for commenting, have a blessed day
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