Just a Girl

Who am I ? 
               ill tell you this im just a girl with in a girl, hidden behide layers of my self. I am 
selfish and cruel , beautiful and charming. i'm the girl next door with hidden lies. I'm a sister 
and a pretend mother..
                i'm just your average teenage girl, but i have pores and deep lines etched with in 
my soul. Of course im not perfect but i never said i was.
                                        i'm just a girl.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Wilson Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 2:02 PM
I really like your poem It's really good
A   Avatar
May 12, 2010 at 3:15 AM
Hello just a girl, here i am to comment again and say Thanks for your wonderful words. This is a real honest cool write about yourself. At times I call myself a poet whit in another Poet. Cool the way you expressed- girl with in another girl,- enjoyed,..p.d.
Flach Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 8:34 PM
Just a girl that has a way with words. Most beautiful, intelligent, successful women started out being "just a girl". Nicely written. I enjoyed your poem.
A   Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 6:50 PM
true, no one is , enjoyed the write
Pickett Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 6:46 PM
Excellent thoughts here my friend....:JP}
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