Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Just A Few Of Plants I Like

Forsythia shakes her golden plumb.
Plum tree dances in her wedding gown
And Barlett pears soon to put on a display.
Some daffodils still wear their spring crown. 

How I miss my beautiful pale pink rose
Once upon the garden gate trellis ran.
Delightful fragrance a sensuous balm
Oh! To see you there once again.  

Brambles started to grow upon the trellis.
Choking out your beauty my dear friend
Once the aroma lifted my downed spirit.
I did not want our relationship to end. 

  

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Duke Beaufort March 15, 2024 at 2:30 PM Sara, your kind view of the plants and flowers is much appreciated. Watching them all is a joy. I know I also feel sad when they are threatened by disease or competition. There are some as you note that are just so pleasant to look at and enjoy. Sara Kendrick March 15, 2024 at 3:07 PM Duke, Weeds are just so destructive to a garden or a plant. I think the worst thing that has gotten into my plants is poison ivy. I can't do anything about the poison ivy because I am allergic to it and the doctor said for me not to ever get it on me again or if I do to come immediately to a doctor or hospital. Thanks for dropping by. Sara Kendrick

Paige Hind March 13, 2024 at 5:45 PM Ah, this is very lovely, Sara. The rhyme flow was beautiful... Sara Kendrick March 14, 2024 at 4:19 AM Why, thank you, Paige. I appreciate your visit. Sara K

Valsa George March 8, 2024 at 7:54 PM Such a lovely description. Roses are the best with their beauty a aroma. Roses that climb on the trellis with clusters of flowers are indeed a sight to view. Beautiful poem, dear Sara. Sara Kendrick March 9, 2024 at 4:42 AM Why, thank you, Valsa. I enjoyed the pale pink running rose that I had at one time, but it eventually died. I don't know if it got too shady or if briars choked it out or if my husband killed it with weed killer. Sara K

Gershon Wolf March 7, 2024 at 8:34 PM Sweet, Sara. Pretty as a picture! Sara Kendrick March 8, 2024 at 2:20 AM Thank you, Gershon. I appreciate you. Sara K

Sotto Poet March 7, 2024 at 1:13 PM Sara, your poem adeptly encompasses the fundamental rhythms of nature's cycles, while also delving into the poignant emotions evoked by cherished recollections of a beloved garden and its blooms. The poem achieves this effect through its skillful use of evocative imagery. Sara Kendrick March 7, 2024 at 3:21 PM Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara K

Ink Empress March 7, 2024 at 12:54 PM Dear sara, this answers my questions, and reveals your love for flowers and how beautifully and in such a soulfully moving manner youv painted imagery, in such a sophisticated and mellifluous rhythm. I love and saw through your words, plum trees dancing, in their wedding gowns, and pale pink roses. Pink rose is the national flower of maldives and they smell so sweet. I love them. Gorgeous picture to go with your write too, pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always Sara Kendrick March 7, 2024 at 3:20 PM Why, thank you, I E. It has been a nice spring day here today. We actually saw some sun. I enjoyed the spring coming alive in trees in blossoms, shrubs blooming and some spring flowers bulbs. I need all the Light of Jesus that I can get. Sara K

Silent One March 7, 2024 at 10:50 AM Dear Sara K, poem beautifully captures the essence of nature's cycles and the bittersweet emotions tied to memories of a beloved garden and its flowers. The imagery of Forsythia shaking her "golden plumb" and the Plum tree dancing in her "wedding gown" vividly paints a picture of the garden coming to life in springtime... I love flowers as you know... Sara Kendrick March 7, 2024 at 11:26 AM SO, Glad to know that you enjoy flowers and their beauty as well. Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to comment. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 7, 2024 at 7:38 AM Dear Sara, What a heartfelt tribute to the beauty of nature and the memories it holds. Your words describe an amazing garden and the emotions tied to it, from the golden forsythia to the pale pink rose. The images are evocative, and the longing for past beauty is palpable. This is a nostalgic and touching piece. Your love for nature shines through, inspiring us to cherish the moments and connections we hold dear. Beautiful reflections, Sara. - Blessings, Daniel Sara Kendrick March 7, 2024 at 11:25 AM Thank you, Daniel for the nice comments about my work and for the blessings. My daughter, her son and her granddaughter have just left so I am exhausted. LOL..Sara K